This is lovely! You've really captured the texture of Ryou's feelings here.

Very nice (and nonconfusing, which is great, because 'symbols' is still on my mind xD). Ryou is such a great character, and you wrote this really well /heart/

The ending was different, and I'm rather partial to it :3

Wow. Just wow.
Don't actually know what to say but this deserves a review to say how great it is, love the ending.

You get a standing ovation here.

You've got some definite ability as an author. Even more so when compared to most of the tripe found on this website.

Your style is good, you remember your grammar rules, you can spell (!) and you write Tendershipping subtext that's actually subtext rather than "Oh, it's only subtext because I think that word sounds better than just plain Tendershipping." There's too much of that.

The only thing that I can point to that wasn't as good about this fic is the characterization. It's not bad (certainly more IC than ninety percent of the stuff on but something about it seemed... off. Like I said, though, it's not bad, hell, it could just be a difference of opinion in how we see Ryou.

At any rate, your stuff is good. I like it a lot, and it's so reassuring to find something enjoyable in the midst of the pit.

Keep up the good work!

365...no?

I love the combinations of words you use here. "Grow-wild," "lightning-white," "passion kiss-trembled"--reading this, I really get a sense of the violence of the storm and Ryou as he is overwhelmed by it.

Yay for Tendershippy subtext. :D

Awesome work. Yeah. It was just cool.