Since you wrote such a nice story at the end of 2006 and promised to post an epilogue shortly thereafter, I must assume that death has laid claim to you.

May I offer this suggestion for a possible completion of your story?

Possession and automatic writing...'nuff said.

My condolences btw.

;)

Wow, this is an excellent story. I've been trying to write something similar and your story has inspired me to finish mine. Thanks!

aw how sweet XD kinda weird but kawaii!

Your story sucks. You really shouldnt write anymore, unless its normal.

Though the characters were not acting as I would say is how they are portrayed, I like this pairing so much that I can overlook everything.

aww that's so cute _ for a second there i thought vincent was gonna leave, but im glad he didnt,

very well written to _

I found you! Seriously, when I saw this I was like... Dude! I know that title! But it can't be... OMGWTFITIS! XD Then I just had a little spaztic moment. Now I'm leaving a review. _

Well, considering I already read this before it was posted here,

my thoughts still stand. I love it. In my opinion, it's awesome.

And I can understand constructive criticizem... but seriously, does Erulastiel Nyximi NOT know what OOC means? You clearly said, "Slight OOCness" then at the end of the warning you said, "If you don’t like anything listed here, then please turn back now"!

So that whole review they left... pretty much pointless and stupid. .

Sorry, my head is killing me. I'm a wee bit on the bitchy side right now. XD

-Saarni V. 9

That was a very stressful story! XD Oh well, things turned out good in the end. Thanks for making my day, being able to read this... personally, I don't think it was PG-13... but I'm not complaining either. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Okay, I'm going to be completely honest here, and that is I really really like this, BUT there are a few things about it that bothers me. One is that the two characters' personalities don't match from the first half and the second half of the story. When they were trying to seduce each other it was so hot and great(!), and it's refreshing to FINALLY NOT SEE a wimpy uke Cloud or a super angsty Vincent, and I firmly believe those two are capable of being such devilish teases because they have dimensions other than the stereotype. However, after that segment it's suddenly turned into a sappy novel. Dimensions, yes, sappy like girls, not quite. I mean, they're guys. Damn teases, sure, say I love you? Um, kinda hard to do. (Although the whole "please don't leave" part from Cloud is in character and believeable.) So it gives me a disjointed feeling, like the two from the night before are completely NOT the two from the morning after. (By the way, we kind of need an explanation for the before if there's going to be a different after. Even a few sentences would be fine.) And that's my opinion on this.

Oh yeah, I still have to emphasize that this was one of the best and most erotic sexual foreplays I've read. I mean it. It shows that non-graphic descriptions are just as sexy (maybe more) as graphic NC-17 ones. Good job!

Great story, I wish you'd have gone into the intimate details though. Everything else is explained so wonderfully, though, if that's not your thing I understand. That's my tough spot too I think. I'm also a Cloud fan so...wish there were more of him being the 'masculine' if you will.

No offense either way, just my preference, which should be a compliment since I enjoyed this one as much as I did )

Will be waiting for update/epilogue.

I really liked this.. it was actually cute *tihi*

horribly out of charater for both Vincent and Cloud :[

"i think i love you" For serious: this is amazingly good/hot. Yes. /Very/ well written. I will be estatic when/if there is an epilouge. Thank you for writing. .:hearts:.

Beautiful. Love it.

-SAW