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Sterenig
2008-02-04 . chapter 3
Severus' plan is so nice ! Just like him to plan something one month before to avoid rejection ! I loved that fic and I'd like to see them in a sequel.
Elusive Horizon
2007-08-19 . chapter 3
That was really fun to read. I can't believe all those people were in on the plan. Heck, I can't believe Severus actually planned all that.
lil-baby-tash
2007-04-29 . chapter 3
OMFG! i was totally not expecting that!

heh heh harry was in on it.. and luna.. and minerva!! THEy'RE ALL OUT TO GET HER! hahahahahahah i love it... WOOT WOOT!

definatly favouriting this!
lil-baby-tash
2007-04-29 . chapter 2
"Hmm… Hermione, let’s think about this… He has an open book in his hand and was recently looking down at it. Any guesses on what he could be doing!"

IT'S LIKE HER IC IS SNAPE HAHAHAHAHAHAH!

lol shexeh snapeh man! i loves meh shexeh snape!!

okay now i've got that over with YUM love the chapter... you have the uncanny ability to make me laugh at really weird moments for instance my mum came into tell me tea was ready... i laughed at this:

"1. The bludger left a perfectly round gap in the back of the stand right where my head was.

2. I am suddenly on the floor, tucked between people’s feet.

3. And someone says ‘ow’"

my mother gave me the 'your totally and utterly crazy' look!

lmao im off to read zee rest *she say in appaling french accent*
Ekiushi
2007-03-12 . chapter 3
...This is what, my 3 Hermione/Snape story in the last two days?

I don't want to be apart of this so called dark side - also I've never been a fan of cheesecake. But yet, here I am. I am reading the very thing (Hermione/Snape) that I swore I would never touch. Here I am reading these stories instead of doing my homework.

How's that for procrastination.

And I wasn't sent running away as fast as possible. Yes, it was good. Very enjoyable. And most importantly, not disturbing! It worked. At the very least, it worked for me!
LyssieJ
2006-12-24 . chapter 3
Utterly hilarious!
Chrl268
2006-12-23 . chapter 3
heeheehee, so good!
maritinkerbell
2006-11-30 . chapter 3
Oh! I've read that book! It was really weird!

Yay! You updated! Great ending! This is really sweet! (The bit where she's still kissing after he pulls away is kinda weird though.) WRITE MORE STORIES! Pleasy please please?
notwritten
2006-11-29 . chapter 3
good
Chocolate Herrings
2006-11-29 . chapter 3
Jeez, you have never failed to make me laugh! I can't think of much to say because I still seem to be chuckling...
Marching Knight
2006-11-29 . chapter 3
Extremely interesting, i liked it. I hope you write another Severus Snape/Hermione Granger Fic.
Keep writing,
Idrial Gimilzor
Popkin16
2006-11-29 . chapter 3
A wonderful ending! As I've already mentioned, I wouldn't be too fond of being manipulated, although I'd go easier on the manipulators if they hooked me up with Severus. :D

This was a hilarious chapter! I loved how Hermione was so nervous that she enlisted help (who turns out to be in on it anyway). I think it's rather sweet that Severus would go through all that trouble to dance with Hermione.

I'd be so emabarassed if I was still kissing while the guy I'm kissing pulls away. I'm not sure I could stand to look them in the face after that, lol!

An amazing end to yet another brilliant piece of writing. I'm really looking forward to any updates you're going to have, and that one-shot you're planning!

So, as always, I LOVED your story, I hope you update a story (VERY!) soon! Great job!
PassingTime
2006-11-29 . chapter 3
God I seriously thought he was taking the miky when he started telling her that everyone was in it... he wasnt right? ... 0_o

haha did they all think she needed to get some? Conspiracy *shakes head*

Another great chapter ^_^
your updates helped brighten up my miserable week!
Chocolate Herrings
2006-11-26 . chapter 2
Hehehe! What can I say... Snape sounds heavenly...and Hermione's inner voice sounds hellish -- in a perfectly amusing way.
PrincessSpiffy
2006-11-26 . chapter 2
ROFLMAO!

True, this chappie wasn't funny jokewise, but the mere awkwardness of the situations you put Hermione in made me giggle the entire time I was reading :D

Well, that and Snape apparently being built like a Greek God ;)
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