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goku90504
2009-09-09 . chapter 1
i'd like to see what nabiki and the rest of the tendo's do if ranma decided he'd rather just leave than put up with all of that he doesnt have to pull his load around there if he's not staying there would be his logic and what nabiki's doing to him has got to be grateing on his sense of honor ...
i'd also like to see what would happen if he goes along with it and starts to get addicted to the point where he can no longer be with just one girl and it's nabiki's fault for pushing him

so many intresting ways this story could go
Wrin
2009-08-17 . chapter 1
... ... ... That. Was. HOT.

Now that that's out of the way, the story is very well written. It only stretches OOC a tiny bit, which is more than acceptable. I truly hope you decide to continue it at some point, but I understand that it would probably not last longer than another chapter without devolving into pure smut.

You should probably put a lime warning on it for good measure, but that line is hard to draw.
Sefirot
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Great first chapter. I look foward to the nex update!
Howard Russell
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
This is a ton of fun! I hope this continues.

You've really made a strong case for Akane liking this Ranma. I'd kinda like to see that ship to develop. Nabiki is perfectly in character in that she sees Ranma as a resource, not a potential husband. Any pairing there would be purely contractual. Ranma deserves love.

No secrets? How's that gonna work with Ryoga's secret? Actually, if he does tell Nabiki, she could easily come up with a way to keep P-chan out of Akane's bed without breaking Ranma's oath. The solution is pretty simple.
john1234
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
Hahaha. Great read!.
Kalepos
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
Great chapter, I look forward to a continuation some time in the future.
New lord of darkness
2008-01-06 . chapter 1
This is awsome, i cant wait for the next chapter
Rose1948
2007-07-11 . chapter 1
roflmao* This is great! Any chance of you continuing this?
Gangsta Spanksta
2007-02-10 . chapter 1
Ah, but you got the title all wrong. :) A better title for this would have been: "Pimp Mama Nabiki" *G*
Skull2
2007-01-31 . chapter 1
I like this story and want to see more coming in this story as its funny and good entertaining to read. Will Akane or Kasumi and others finally get their way with Ranma?? Hopefully they do!! heheh
Zero-Vision
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
cool
EPM
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Wow, so Nabiki finally makes the most use out of Ranma! I'm a little surprised at how far you went, but not in a bad way though who you chose as the third person was unexpected. I hope this stays a Nabiki/Ranma, his 'job' not withstanding. Perhaps a little more romance between the two to balance out the steamy stuff? Hope you finish soon.
dennisud
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
Long chapter and the changes sure make this one a bit different.
Though I like nabs with Ranma it seems she'll be whorijg him out and that is getting a bit under my ski.
If he'd have stuck to the Tendo sisters I wouldn't have minded much.

So will this continue?

dennisud
vashu
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
There is the third time I get to read fanfic with this type of beginning and this is the third time I don't get some waffy RanmaNabiki pairing that I want. (

Well, since they are acting by lemon rules - why don't you spare a lot of efforts about 'make it work with the jock' and turn it to be pure lemon.

If that would be the case - include all the cast and 'make him go against his preference' too.

Waiting impatiantly for continuation.
griffenvamp
2007-01-21 . chapter 1
you lost me with were this story is going?
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