Whoa. Spaz on intermission 4. U got issues, it was interesting the fic that is, u gotta post stuff pll will read only a nut would read this much. i was bored so sue me.

This was soo good you should do a sequel for this story!!..and yes we want you to post another story!!

Oh yeah... actually We finished the second and working on the third... i'd love to give a hint about what their about but... i dont think Catgirlprime will let me... lol anyway about the mary-sue thing and perfectionist with emma, First i dont think emma is mary-sueish if you can explain to me how, that'd be great... and the perfect thing, that doesn't even cover the surface of what emma is, i could tell you but i think it would take too long lol

anyway thank you people for leaving reveiws i'm sure i speak for catgirlprime too when i say that we really appreciate what you think the story is like, if you like the characters your oppinion on things yatta yatta you know what i mean x]

...Talk about Mary Sue-attack. >

ARGH! YOU LEFT A CLIFFY!Anyhoo...IT WAS AN AWESOME STORY! Despite the spelling and the fact Edana and Emma are TOO Mary-sue-ish. It was very interesting and very dramatic, but mind you me Emma is JUST TOO PERFECT!And it seems a bit unfair Alfons doesn't have speical powers like Edana, cuz they're twins and all.

Another thing i'd like to say is, if u posted the story 4 reviews i suggest next time posting so fast and also make ur chapters longer, im usually never the type to read really really really long fics, like lots of people. BUT HELL!! IT WAS GOOD!

PLS UPDATE SOON IM LOOKING FORWARD 2 IT[not the emmaxed stuff thou...]

I guess Ed, and Emma are a couple now lol!...so good update soon.!

M two mary-sues going all out. I like it!! We need more of this horrible confusion of emotions!!

Back for more!

Still more spelling errors, you really have to get this proof-read. u hav a partner in this yes? both of u PROOF-READ! And also, it's no wonder u dont hav many reviews, Emma and Edana are TOO Mary-sue-ish!!

But heck it's all about having fun not the reviews!!

Ok this is the second best chapter!! Those twins do need some decentcy!! But heck if Edana were a boy this wouldn't be possible!![Edana should be a boy thou.]

Now the second section:

Still many spelling errors. Might I mention that Emma is becoming TOO Mary-sue-ish, along with Edana.

Good moment between the Ed's. I wonder if Ed will become as tall as his older self!! This is ur best chapter yet!!

WO! EDANA SURE GOT HER STRENGTH FROM HER DAD! YEAH!!

Now I'll comment on ur 1st section.[i luv giving reviews!!]

A few words are misspelled yup yup

Holy!! As i said earlier very interesting!! SERIOUSLY!!

Interesting how Edana, is going to do human transmutaion. And also how her name is EDana, since in the beginning it was Ed's idea to do the same thing. VERY INTERESTING!! I SHALL READ ON!!