"take that, shinn! you think my sister's 'really hot'!" - kira

gods, i actually wrote that instead of a proper review! anyway, i found this fic funny...most probably 'cause of the last part.

nice

you cannot just end it there! it's too funny to end it there! i'll love to see what happens after that! anyway, great work! _

Whoa! this is actually dramatic how Shinn and Kira tel each other about their sisters. Geez... it's a cliffy I wanna see what Shinn's reaction after he heard the name of Kira's sister. Great job.

O_o...i shudder to think about what happens after that very last sentence...Shinn just might punch Kira LOL

or, faint...

hi...omg. i want to noe wat happens next! wat will be shinn's reaction and so on! im sad though cos i noe this is a oneshot, argh! there was really good, very original and creative and juz superb! i love ur stories, good job :D