Wooo! I LOVE IT! You should totally write another chapter and update

good so far but i would like to see a longer chapter.

little advice, dont use future tense. use past tense.

Hey it's been a long time update already slackers

3 chapters in three days awesome but it already december hurry it up there

I swaer not flaming you just reminding HURRY UP NOW (gr)

ok not very stylish but I got my point across now hurry you're making me depressed.

oh noes... i don't think thats going to be good for ether roy... *evil grin*

Too funny ed don't know how to get a bar off oh well at least he was polite about the whole shower thing and his new boyfriend ROY xoxox

Hah Hah

seems awesome keep writing seems to be getting good! really

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i like your story... am i one of the fans? yay! keep it up!

Cool start. Give it time, people will come round and read it!

Update soon!

im not feeling very helpful or creative so im gonna write the usual. great story, wish there was more,blah blah blah

omg... this story rules! poor ed and poor gwen... nether knows whats really happening do they?