OMG! I loved it! So sweet! Please, please continue!

Hey, will there be any more of this fic (i check back weekly P)

All i can say about this fic is wow! This is my fourth time reading it and it still has me addicted. The emotion you bring forth through your writing is simply amazing. You really have a lot of talent and i really hope to see more of this and other HaruToki fics from you. I love the way you bring Eisen and Yasuaki together and the way you write their character, feelings and actions are perfect. Thank you for such a great fic...i haven't been able to and don't think i will find one better than this! Will there be anymore of this?

Kyouko xx

This is a wonderfull story! I've been looking for a nice Harukanaru toki no naka de yaoi stories and this is a perfect one! I love Yasuaki/Eisen pairing and it's great how you write long and realistic chapters...

I can't wait for the next chapter sp please update soon!

Thank you!

Well...what does one say after that? I must admit I do prefer the wanton Ei-chan rather then the bold one in the previous chapter. That was surprising to read. Once again this chappie oozed smexiness...and was an enjoyable read. _ Your descriptions and wordings between the two Genbu boys is fantastic...and I can picture it all in my head...not complaining one bit. Now all I need is for Taka-chan and Tomo-kun to creep in their too. Haha!

how does one describe this chapter? It oozed kawaii-ness...and then I was swamped with Y and E hotness! Not that I'm complaining... hehehe... Almost a little weird reading this while listening to Tomo-sama singing, though the read was thoroughly enjoyed. ah, makes me want to write T and T mush now...but I'm far too lazy to do that. Well, here's to another successful chapter! Onward to the next! I'm finally getting off my butt (sort of) to read your story again.

Dude...that sucked. You totally got me. *sigh*

Anyway, guess now that you've finally gotten me to get off my lazy ass and say something, I should tell you how much I like your story. -

Tons! I was so excited when I saw there was an update for this. Even though the update wasn't an actual chapter, it made me go back and reread it and there was much joy in that. There aren't enough Yasuaki/Eisen fics out there. There aren't enough HaruToki, period.

I love the fact that Eisen isn't helpless. I haven't seen past episode 14, so I don't know how he acts in the later episodes, but I worry about other people seeing him as weak. I don't think he is at all. The fact that he's my favorite character has nothing to do with it. _ Hehe.

I like the reasoning you give to Yasuaki's change. I'd like to find out who this god is that saved him and gave him his heart.

Even before he got his heart, I thought he was adorable. He felt so bad, having hurt Eisen. I don't think that he would have felt that much remorse over hurting someone else, unless it was Akane. Eisen truly is a wonder. :D

And Tachibana...he really is incorrigible. Good thing he has Takamichi to keep him in line.

I'm greatly looking forward to seeing how their relationship progresses. Hopefully soon they'll start having less misunderstandings with each other. They really should stop second-guessing and just go with it. It's obvious they love each other. Everything else will come if they let it. :)

I also hope that Eisen will have a chance to show off his skills to the other Hachiyou. He's really kick-ass when he wants to be. And if you could bring Eisen's brother into the mix, that'd be even better. *is totally a sucker for sibling relationships* I think he'd be happy to know that his little brother's in love.

Well, I think that's about it so far. I love the story and am waiting anxiously for an update. Preferably with an actual chapter this time. _

Hope the review was coherent. Happy writing! Ja! :D

Forgive me, I'm still laughing at the last bits when Yasu and Eisen came back to Kyou. OMG, Tomomasa is such a meanie! LMAO. That was very entertaining indeed. And I have to say it... I love the little bit of T&T shown in here. _

XD Yay! A double update! Kyuu!

This story is really very cute, it has a plot to it as well, and it's good to see that Eisen and Yasuaki still have emotional moments like in this chapter.

Hehe, of course it'd be Tomomasa who teaches them about 'that'.

I look forward to reading more.

Genbu is LOVE! X3

Hi sailorLight22 !

i like your note Unbroken,it's wonderful!And i like eisen too!Please make an effort and spread this CP！

oh,i love yasuki X eisen !

By the way,have you established a japanese website? i'm afraid i had seen your name in a japanese note as author.

Ah, my second fave pairing after Tomo-sama and Taka-kun. Its very rare to come upon a story with these two...and you write them so darn well. Congrats! I love the way you describe everything, and the way your writing style flows so very well. I can see it all in my mind as I read it. Will await more when you have the chance to update. My only question was, is this story at I could have sworn it was...unless I'm confused.

Keep up the great work! _

*fans self* Whoo, that last scene got a little hot there...I love it! And how Eisen was worried that Yasuaki's love was not for him or even the same kind, that was some good drama there. And Eisen shouldn't worry too much, like mentioned Yasuaki would NEVER hurt him (with the 'unconscious' scratches being an exception), and after his first orgasm of course he'd be surprised at what had taken place.

That god was Ryuujin, wasn't it?

I am really looking forward to reading more, Yasusen rules!

I really like this story and I love the pairing.

I haven't seen any other stories with Eisen/Yasuaki.

Unfortunately I'm very bad at giving constructive critisism, I'll have to read it again and then tell you if I find anything.

I will definately be looking forward to the next chapter please update soon.

you should continue this! Im curious to know if they can make it :)

PLEASE!

continue it;s AWESOME!