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| Ruusukainen 2007-02-10 ch 5, | abuseMy God, I can“t believe you only have two reviews in this story! Well, let me be the third. I absolutely loved this, just like most of your stories. Just like I have said before, your Ryan is the one I love. I liked the end. (: Keep writing. |
| yellowvalley 2006-11-17 ch 5, | abuseGuh. I loved it. I totally have much respect for people who can pack such a punch with so few words. |
| pm153 2006-11-15 ch 3, | abuseSo many new updates from you today! It's a real treat :) I loved the beginning of this chapter with Ryan forgetting a little bit about Marissa each day. In real life that does happen, and now his memories and pictures are all he has left of her. ANd it totally makes sense that he would be unable to remember the good times but would be haunted by her death. Ryan didn't get a happy goodbye like Julie and Summer and Seth. Instead his last memory of her is a horrible one. I think it's interesting how you've made Ryan's behavior so similiar to his family. He really has given up on himself and has wound up like every other one of his family members. I also like how he actually made it to Berkeley but stopped trying. This is great, I love your work so much :) |