awhhh (:

this is such a cute story!

you captured Holly's personality/attitude perfectly :D

This is such a great story. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE I know you haven't updated in years but please do:)

Great story! I love Breakfast at Tiffany's, and you've done the characters perfectly! Good job.

You have to finish this story. It was great and I'm still left at a Cliffhanger. I love Breakfast at Tiffany's and this story was how I had pictured a fanfic about it. So, please finish this amazing fanfic.

Breakfast at Tiffany's is one of my favorite movies and I am a HUGE Audrey Hepburn fan. I loved it! Great job! I would have never thought about writing a sequel but you've written it very well and you seem to know the characters inside and out! Please, by all means, write more if you can!

UPDATE!

i gotta know what happens with them.

PLZ!

NOW!

-Dubblez-

*gasp*

why would Holly do that?

-Dubblez-

Will you continue?

When you actually pick up a book and notice that dialogue doesn't directly follow one another, thus limiting complete and utter confusion for the readers, continue this story. You have good language use- I'm not going to say grammar because grammar includes paragraph structure- and if you didn't jumble the dialogue into an inconherent mess, it'd be good.

How interesting. It's very soap operaish but I like your writing so far, and I'm curious as to how you'll continue this.

ugh...complications complications, poor Paul and Holly :( Liked this chappie ;) Cant wait to read more :)

You better keep going! Will Cat be named? Will Holly ever marry Paul!

i think the story is really good...

I like it and you definetly should continue! :)