This is one of the best fics i've seen in a long time.
please update soon

A great chapter.
Not sure I agree that Lenna could rip an esper/summoned monster away from Rydia of all people though. Doesn't strike me as right.

this fic is very well writen please update it.

Sorry, missed last review time. Have been crazy nuts busy. Looks like things are getting crazy-mad-intense, huh?

One of these days, I'll sit down and give you a properly long review with picking over plot twists and such... right now, just trying to get some sleep.

You know, the bad guys would do a better job taking over the worlds if they were half as organized as the good guys.

Nice to see a rapid update scehdule :) Renewed enthusiasm, perhaps?

I wish I could give you a lengthier review, but my schedule's exhausting me nowadays... fanfiction is definitely taking a backseat.

Lots o' plot twists... when it's done, I'll probably need to go back and give it the attention it deserves. Particularly liked the Celes/Rachel thing... sheesh, now they're stuck together, huh?

M, I always felt like Tellah was a bit off ingame. And the Celes/Rachel thing? Really interesting to see how it plays out since in your setting they actually have the opportunity to meet.

One thing... I wonder if Angela didn't come off a bit flat in characterization? I'm rather partial to her, and without a touch of her bitchy/sarcastically funny streak, she just doesn't feel right to me.

I'm behind on my reviews, among many other things, so this will just be a short 'n sweet note to say I'm still reading and liking.

Schala. YES! Though if you play Chrono Cross, you find she didn't die after all, but that game's not in your crossover, so you're excused.

Without spoiling anything... Celes, Rosa hmm... genetic white mage abilities? Talk about breaking canon, heh. Trying to keep track of where all these damn portals are, and who has crossed over into what world. Though frankly, based on the sub-screen pics, I think Celes is better looking. But there is some very nice animation of each in the PS and DS intros, respectively.

But Celes's introspection is quite convincing and realistic, including the snoring part, LOL.

I like how you portray the girls. Profile says you're a guy, and a lot of guy fanfic writers seem to, how shall I put this politely... not really get women? Seriously, we're not that hard. The men are evenly measured as well. Nice balance.

Mildly curious if we're going to end up with Celes x Kain. That Celes x Locke canon is a tough one to challenge. Sheesh, crossover offers ALL SORTS of pairing possibilities. (Rydia x Crono, anyone? Lenna x Duran?) Rydia... you totally complicated things with Rachel, huh? Damn Espers.

I'm really noticing the enormous amount of possibilities when one combines the games.

Wow, I'm overwhelmed with Cid-ness. Might as well throw some Chocobos into the mix.

Only criticism is, in this chapter, some of your characters are not properly introduced in the scene. I don't remember Edge being there, and Cecil specifically mentions he did not know Strago's name, but then suddenly it's used. I would hate for you to resort to simply listing off those present like an attendance sheet, but surely everyone can be segued in smoothly?

Trying to picture the FFIV and FFVI map overlap. Almost got it. OK, now SD3 and FFV? When does CT's world fit in? Is it time-specific?

Guess I'll find out next time.

M e e e e e e e e e e e e e e r f!

very good. dialogue was well done.

woo, Schala! :)

Nice imagery, in the Palo scene-setting. Yeah, I guess they weren't landing anywhere without attracting some unwanted attention.

Still wondering what Lise has to do with Tycoon, anyway. Looks like Toma and family spilled just about everywhere. So, in your version, what was Lenna's job class(es)? Until now, it didn't seem like she knew how to do a hell of a lot. Also, I probably missed this, but why did Lenna have amnesia and not Faris and Cara? Maybe their Hiryuu transportation protected them?

Rosa's sister, indeed... I am intrigued to see where you go with this...

Probably at some point will need to reread the whole thing to get it all. Out of curiousity, how long are you thinking it will be?

Superb! It's got to be hard to combine four different gameplots and go so far in the datails. Love the Bartz x Terra-side, since FFV does get too little attention. Keep 'em coming.

So I'm wondering... Elliot is also Lise's brother, and a kid in the original Secret of Mana. Coincidence? I can't remember if any of Terra's kids had names. There was also a Simone in SD3...

Yes, the End of Time is depressing as hell.

I noticed that with every person falling through a portal, a different link is formed... curious, did you map out who goes where to make sure everyone is represented?

So, I guess we have a couple Cids, and a couple Falcons, as well... Yay, Square Enix concept recycling. And Celes and Rosa... whoa. Though personally, in my head, Celes and Rosa look rather different... Interested to see the results of the Rachel plot twist...

Terra on Mt Ordeals seems perfect. She has a lot in common with Cecil, really, the pristine hero or heroine...

You know, I always thought KluYa was a backstory waiting to happen?

Anyway, interested to see what comes next.
Small pickiness: Mysidia is WEST of Mt Ordeals.

Still here.

There's two things I really like about this fic: one, the sheer ambitiousness of such a project, yet everything fits, every scene has a purpose; and two, the characters, both revisits to favorites and interesting new uses of otherwise minor characters.

Example: Toma. He is from how many worlds? And I barely even remember him, because Chrono Trigger wasn't my favorite of the five games (not that it's bad, but I do love FFVI and SD3!).

I have an idea about what Lise and Lenna are all about, but I'll hold off, since I know you don't want suggestions, and probably don't want spoilers in your reviews either.

I'm glad also that my favorite characters get top billing. Lise, Hawk, WIN. Terra, WIN. Cecil, Rydia, Kain, Angela... Actually, all I am really waiting for is more Celes and Locke.

I must congratulate you on the first truly successful use of full omniscient POV. Normally in fanfics when I see the thoughts of multiple people in the same scene, I think it looks sloppy, but here it flowed well. I imagine there really wasn't any other way to work this many characters.

Celes and Rosa, hm? Never noticed, but...