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Sage Dans Les Lys 11/1/10 . chapter 1cute story |
Amal 3/17/10 . chapter 2 the link on the AN isnt working, is there another way to get there? |
vampiresskyuba 1/5/09 . chapter 1 love it compared to yours my story sucks*tear* good one byes Vampiresskyuba |
Sevvy101 7/15/08 . chapter 1Aww, i love it! This is the same person from Gaia who commented like, a minute ago. Turns out I never reviewed your fic on here...hmm -shrugs- either way iam now Its a lovely oneshot, and i absolutely adore the way you wrote Mori! Good job! -Erika |
Evil RULZ 4/28/07 . chapter 1that was so cute :) |
Tsuki Kagami 3/21/07 . chapter 1LOL I loved it! I still think that you should do a Honey/Kagome on. |
Roxy Leigh Blue 3/20/07 . chapter 1that was too cute! this may sound like much, but have you thought of doing a prologue as to how they met? much love always squishy x |
Saturnblue 2/8/07 . chapter 1It's pretty good and is this a one shot or more than a chapter. It doesn't need too much unnecessary detail to make a good story. It have the basic element and it convert everything that needed to be said into this short chapter. Good Work. |
Persephone of Abydos 2/2/07 . chapter 1Hm... Kagome with Mori... I'm not sure it's a good fit; I could see her more easily with Hikaru (if she HAD to be paired with an Ouran boy, that is). But that's just me. Anyway: cute story! Mori's reaction to the ultrasound was very Mori. You should write more little oneshots here. |
Balerion 2/1/07 . chapter 1I'm adding you to my hit list for writing a wonderful story but making it a one-shot. WHY! Why must you torture me so! I love this! I want it to be more than just a one-shot. PLEASE! WRITE MORE! |
Shiori Mayonaka no Yume 1/13/07 . chapter 1:3 how cute! |
zxX-wing-Xxz 1/1/07 . chapter 1that was cute and well written 3 |
flakeykim 11/22/06 . chapter 1really cute :3 i like it |
Ravena Felidae 11/21/06 . chapter 1*anime faint* |
RomanticPrincess 11/17/06 . chapter 1Yes! FINALLY SOMEBODY WROTE A OHSHC/IY CROSSOVER! I really liked this oneshot! it was so SWEET! Keep up the good work! Ja ne! |