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| Emryal 2008-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was deep. I love the portrayal of John House. Thanks for writing!~ |
| TwistedLilBarbie 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was...excellent. |
| Wuchel1 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseNice! I liked it. |
| wih 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abusevery good story... I like how you portrait John as a 'decent' guy. and it's fuelling my despise (well I should say 'open hatred') for Tritter. (I once wrote an MST over a LJ where I killed him... twice!) *thinks happily about that moment* |
| KidsNurse 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, as usual. I actually feel that John House qualifies as a human being in this scene--which attests to your skill at portraying his character. I liked the little medical detail about the acetaminophen; ironic that they should choose to treat him with the substance that's slowly killing him. Two powerful men rendered powerless, yet together finding a way to connect, to offer and receive comfort. Beautifully done. ~mj |
| Pepleigh25 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was great!! I really with there was more! I would love you forever if you wrote more...really! |
| Noah and Allie 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, very deep. I really like the way that John is so worried about Greg. Really, really good. Is that all? I'd like to see more. |
| Henrika 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. There isn't very much interaction between these two character and you did a wonderful job filling in all those gaps. Wonderful descriptions and just a good way of seeing the situation. Going on my favorites! Keep writing and update soon! |
| Eleanor J. 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was fabulous. I love the idea of House's dad visiting him in jail. And you did it so well. Please tell me it's not a oneshot ... |