This story is completley amazing and original! It's fantastic so far! By far the best Mai/Joey action Yu Gi oh fanfic on this site! Please please please keep it up and update this! It's amazing and thanks soooo much for writing it!

Anna xox

Yay, thank you! I'm so happy :D

The Kuriboh bit made me laugh. It's funny to picture a cute little Kuriboh as a monster...

Vivian? Vivian? Really? Just what is this myserious lump of metal, anyway? Is that what Vivian's after? I really want to know, please update soon! And yep, definitely more action and suspense this chapter. It's getting more complex and interesting with every chapter.

I really enjoy trying to guess what's going to happen in this story and which characters are going to turn up next. Looking forward to an update :D

Wow, interesting. I never thought of Kuriboh to be that dangerous unless they were in swarms like in Yugi vs. Kaiba. You sure changed my view on that! And Vivian/Rebecca? Whew, I didn't expect Yugi's fangirls to pop up. It'll be quite interesting to see what Vivian's up to, I expect. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you can, please!

Side note: in my last review, I typed "water" instead of "wind". I meant wind, but sometimes my fingers type things that I don't mean for them to.

-KnightxWitch

I was looking over the reviews and realized I missed reviewing chapter 7! Sorry about that! Another great chapter here! What the heck, though? Mai! Vivian? And hey, Rebecca showed up too! The girls are outnumbering the guys now.

It was good with the action and the suspense, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow, I really like this story so far! Exciting... although I wish I knew how the world became that way. The whole plot is very fascinating to me. I like how you've portrayed Mai so far... and Joey seems to be a lot more mature. Serenity's acting like something I'm so used to, and I like it. I can't wait for the next update!

-KnightxWitch

Oh yeah, I guessed that Mai's element would be water. I'm a Harpie Lady nerd. 3

Nice story so far! Interesting plot, and fascinating intro. I'll read the next 6 chaps soon, and I can't wait!

Who regular updates! (not that I'm one to talk... ; )Cool chapter! A tiny bit of concrit this chapter... I thought Jou would've still been shaken up from the mind-tripping stuff last chapter. Maybe it was cause Shizuka asked him a question right off the bat. I thought they could've used a little more reuniting time after Jou's mind trip and Shizuka watching the mind trip. It was all still really good! :D That part just threw me a bit because I was expecting a different reaction.

I'm curious to see Shizuka's secret! Poor Jou, having to go through weird stuff two chapters in a row. Nice little exchange me had with Mai about being afraid of shots. XD Interesting element! Not what I would have guessed. I had a guess for Mai, but now I'm not so sure. Can't wait to see next chapter!

Yay, update!

Mkay, I'm curious now. Serenity has a secret? Oh, I'm going to have fun wondering about that one. As for Mai's element, I'm going to guess that it's fire. Pyro kinetic?

I still love this story. I'm glad there's still a long way to go before it's done :D

wow srsly love this story can't wait for the update :D, please continue, you have a great method of writings and i love your dieas, :)

omg i love it... really you did a good job...

Good story. Definitely.

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Actually, I'm really enjoying it because it's something a bit different and I think you're a great writer. This has most definitely satisfied my thirst for polarshipping.

And a happy new year to you too :D

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Anzu! Poor Jou, having to watch all that! Haha, but Shizuka's there! And she's being awesome! At least Jou can find out that Shizuka's okay, though he won't be happy about her fighting off Monsters, too.

I really like how you've only gradually introduced the whole monster threat and not gone into details about how they came about and everything. We don't really need to know that at this point, only know that they exist. It keeps the story moving. Looking forward to the next chapter!

...does this review mean I get a request? XD

*blinks then blinks again* That is something else for sure. The tension is actually roling of Joey and Valon is intensifying. Valon should know not to say blond jokes at all. Well update when can and take care.

You updated! Yay! Wow, I haven't read this story in ages. Ooh, more fighting! Yes! That should be interesting. And Varon showed up, is there going to be tension with him and Jou over Mai? Mai wants to fight... that's interesting, I would think Jou would be the more likely of the two. But I can see it. It's getting good, keep going! :D

(also, you know you've got half of a sentence at the end of the chapter? ; Is that for the next chapter?)

Oo This is going to get interesting. I am sad to hear about Mokuba though even Tea. Did Kaiba's duel disk technology went haywired? Wonder what the game is going to have in stored for the two. ) Still cute yet Mysterious very interesting. Writing is very intriguing to the last detail. Manage to pull the readers to the point of wonder what to expect next. Please update when you can.