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| PRTFCSI (lazy to sign in ;-... 2007-03-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseaw... that was great! I nearly died when he nearly chose to go with Louie instead of waking up... great story! COngrats on finishing it! |
| rhrforever 2007-03-11 ch 7,  | abuseAw that was the sweetest ending ever. |
| peanut2lb 2007-03-11 ch 7, | abuseI can't believe that's the end!! Barvo!! Bravo!! I loved Mac's line about the bombs and the whole scene with Danny and Louie!! |
| peanut2lb 2007-03-11 ch 6, | abuseWow what an intense chapter. You wrote Sonny's sister, Rose beatifully and the emotion between Danny and Lindsay was superb! |
| ncis-lady 2007-03-11 ch 7, | abuseYay I really like the end! Glad they're both fine! |
| chili-peppers 2007-03-11 ch 7, | abuseOh man amazing ending! That was awesome! great work i really love this fic! |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-03-11 ch 7, | abuseYES! finally an update! We've been hanging here for AGES! haha. And SUCH a BEAUTIFUL ENDING =) LOVED IT |
| Horsefan520 2007-02-13 ch 6, | abuseOMG! OMG! OMG! This was awesome! This is the best and most climactic (spelling?) chapter yet! Please update again soon! *note the puppy dog face |
| rhrforever 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abuseYes! What's Hawkes talking about? And TOTALLY DL ALL THE WAY! |
| DAnNSfreak 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abusePoor, poor Danny. I'm gonna cry! *sobs* Let him be ok! |
| dddynamite 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abuseOMG I love it soo much very amazing! |
| chili-peppers 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abuseOh Man! Amazing chapter! Please dont let him die! *cry* the final chapter! Ive loved reading this. Great job! |
| stargate67 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abuseDanny just has to survive, he's my favorite CSI. What did Hawkes see? Don't keep us in suspense for to long. |
| ncis-lady 2007-02-10 ch 6, | abuseOh my, what a chapter! I thought he would die, and all I could do was thinking "No, don't let him die, she won't let him die, that just won't happen..." Now this is still an open end and I'm so damned curious to find out what will happen. So please write the next part soon! |
| chili-peppers 2007-01-23 ch 5, | abuseOh awesome chapter!! please update soon!! cant wait for the next part! |