Wow! Great story! What a way to introduce Madelyne Pryor. I like this better than how the comics did it. Anyway, this is definitely going into my favourites.
Would you believe I read the entire story in one sitting?

Love your story so far, can't wait to read the rest. Jean and Scott are so cute together.

A beautiful finale! Excellent work!

Strange, isn't it, how fanatical killers and aspiring martyrs hate life the most? Great work!

Wow, you're not sure whether to root for Magneto or the X-Men. Great work!

Indeed, Magneto has become rather "Xavierish". Great work!

Hey, sorry I stopped reading this, but something must have come up back then. Anyway, here I am, picking up where I left off! Nice work!

I hpe u still read new reviews 4 this story Slickboy. This is an awesome fic but I just spotted a very funny line in this chapter, when Maddie and Kitty are talking-'And with a kitchen full of snakes at their aid'. Is this an inexplicable reference 2 Sinister Soldiers(lol) or is it a typo that is meant 2 b 'snacks'?

Dude, Detective Claremont? Bwahahahahah! Nice one there man. And a great chapter this was. Loved it. Will definitely be reading more. Keep up the great work.

That was a nice ending. And I do hope 'the end of one story and the beginning of another' means a sequel :-D

Awesome story! I love how you captured so many characters and...omg...you kept them IN CHARACTER. A-mazing! I could totally see this arc playing out on tv or in the comics. Marvel needs to hire you for oh so many reasons!! Great writing! *crosses fingers for a sequel*

Well, I liked it, but I guess that comes with good writing. Funny how in the comics Jean wasn't too thrilled to hear about Madelyn. Like this one better.

And I can't wait until your next story. Whatever it is, it's sure to be a thriller!

Catch ya later, my friend. Take it easy.

Silverdash

Nick is such a cheerful guy, isn't he? Oh, well. He's always trying making his best despite the headaches the X-Men give him. When Logan and he talk, onlookers usually wonder who will shoot first.

Magneto, ruler of Genosha. It always bothered me in the comics. Why would UN hand over one nation to a world-famous terrorist? At least here they haven't given him the rule. Erik will have to convince them his authority like head-of-state is letigimate. As long as he doesn't return to his old vices, I hope he's succesful.

Now it's come the time for the X-Men coming back. Still, Mystique had a nice detail with Rogue. I'm not shocked Kurt was more accepting. He's most optimistic and most forgiving than his sister.

And meanwhile, Jean and Maddie's bond has strengthened. A good end to a story.

I hope seeing soon your next story. :)

It was nice to see Fury overlook the aftermath of the battle. The surprising thing was that Magneto would be in charge of Genosha. I wonder where I've heard that before?

I understand why Fury wouldn't be too happy with that but it does appear that Magneto has changed. Plus, if Magneto does step out of line, the X-Men will be there to stop him. He will definitely have a lot of work cut out for him but it seems that Magneto and his followers are up to the task.

With the sisters finally reunited, things can only get better. The ending was great and wrapped everything up nicely. I can see a sequel come out of this sometime down the road and I would look forward to that. An excellent job with this story.

hey man, this was definitely an interesting story. I got to admit that the ending was kind of unusual but overall this was a good fic. I'm kind of curious to know what would happen to Genosha now that Magneto is its defacto ruler. I'm also curious about how unfriendly Fury seemed, but considering the situation its very understandable. This was a decent fic and it was definitely interesting. I look forward to seeing what your next fic is, take it easy.