It was great and I hope it isn't a one-shot.

this is great please dont leave it as a one shot!

That was very, very sweet. Give us more, give us more!

please dont leave it a oneshot! it looks really good

please write more this is brilliant

Really good. Keep going with it.

That was so cute. I loved Luna and how she went to the twins' shop becasue she needed to laugh. I really think you should do a bit more of this.

good really good

Aw. I love it. So cute. Write more!

Exploding toilet paper, eh? Arthur would NOT have been happy about that.

Even so - cute tale. Luna is just the girl to aprechiate Fred's sortiment.

continue it, PLEASE!

I like it, its cute. =) I want more than a one-shot though.