Wow, this was absolutely mind-blowing. Great job.

Wow, that ending COMPLETELY shocked me. I had read the story, picturing in my head that they were someplace nice, reveling in being with each other again and then BAM. The whole thing changed. Awesome job on making it not obvious at all, until the very end. One thought for improvement would be with the ending thing with Riku, either make it shorter with more detail, or have something more come out of it, like a time skip or something. Just to show a little more emotion from him. But thats just my thoughts. AWESOME story :3

This was soo sad. WAAHH...I am at the verge of tears. So sad yet beautiful...

*bawl* I shouldn't have read this.

THAT IS SO SAD

OMG.

this is AWEOSME to )

Aw, I was wondering why she kept coughing. That makes me uber sad. Whoa. That is so ironic. They're in heaven, but they're in a fire, so it's like they're in hell. But whenever they're together, they're in heaven.

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Wow. Man, I totally didn't expect that when I first started reading this. Okay, Fate most definitely hates Sora.

*sniff* that was so sad! But I still love it! Great job!

Great, well written story! It was very very cute and also very depressing. I love that song too. :D

omg dats so sad :'(

forever tru

tEaRs11

that's sad. but really well written.

This was extremely sad and depressing but I still loved it D. Great Story I just can't stop reading it over and over again.

-is crying- Oh, my gosh... That was horrendously sad! Seriously... but it was very well written! But very very sad! T.T

well... At least they got to die together. O.o yeah... I just love this story in a depressing kind of way. It's just so sad but I keep wanting to just read it over and over again. It's just awesome. XP Keep Writing!

Woah. That was great. Really sad though, but it's the type of story that really gets you to think deep inside.

Really too bad this is just a one-shot.