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Reviews For: Must be the clouds in my eyes

JennCorinthos
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseOK I love Daniel... I can not wait to read more... Loved this...

JENNIFER
TriGemini
2007-06-04
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds like an excellent story so far. I do hope you'll write more. Until then.
Angel16125
2007-05-05
ch 1,
abusei like it. can't wait for more. :)
LiaBelle
2007-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI like it so far. update soon
Orphelia-Rose
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abusePLEASE PLEASE update! I *love* this story! I am so glad that I stumbled upon your story..it is nice to read something where someone is adopted..it's not often that I see that in a lot of stories...(maybe I miss them all?)
And so far it is nicely written..I love stories where the readers get to 'see' another side of 'Lindsay'. She sounds like a great sister.
I also loved Danny's jealousy =)
I can't wait for more..don't keep us waiting too long!
GREAT job so far!
~ @}-,-`-

P.S. I loved your dedication at the beginning of your story..it was beautiful and SO TRUE!
NCISLOVER
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuselove it
mel60
2007-01-13
ch 1,
abuseGreat start to the story. I don't usually (well almost never)like original characters, but Daniel works. I really like him and I feel him fitting in. Nicely done.
dddynamite
2006-11-18
ch 1,
abuseI love it soo much I cant wait for more!
artigiano
2006-11-16
ch 1,
abuseit's a really great start! please update soon!
chili-peppers
2006-11-16
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! this is briliant so far! cant wait for more! your an awesome writer!
RenLissa
2006-11-15
ch 1,
abuseOh, this one is going to hit me hard - one of my little brothers is adopted (he would hit me if he knoew I was calling him "little", he's shorter than me and the baby of our family, who is the tallest) - and I love hin just as much as the brother my mom gave birth to 17 months after we adopted him. Sniff. Maybe I should call him.
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