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| JennCorinthos 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOK I love Daniel... I can not wait to read more... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| TriGemini 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like an excellent story so far. I do hope you'll write more. Until then. |
| Angel16125 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abusei like it. can't wait for more. :) |
| LiaBelle 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI like it so far. update soon |
| Orphelia-Rose 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusePLEASE PLEASE update! I *love* this story! I am so glad that I stumbled upon your story..it is nice to read something where someone is adopted..it's not often that I see that in a lot of stories...(maybe I miss them all?) And so far it is nicely written..I love stories where the readers get to 'see' another side of 'Lindsay'. She sounds like a great sister. I also loved Danny's jealousy =) I can't wait for more..don't keep us waiting too long! GREAT job so far! ~ @}-,-`- P.S. I loved your dedication at the beginning of your story..it was beautiful and SO TRUE! |
| NCISLOVER 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuselove it |
| mel60 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat start to the story. I don't usually (well almost never)like original characters, but Daniel works. I really like him and I feel him fitting in. Nicely done. |
| dddynamite 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it soo much I cant wait for more! |
| artigiano 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseit's a really great start! please update soon! |
| chili-peppers 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! this is briliant so far! cant wait for more! your an awesome writer! |
| RenLissa 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, this one is going to hit me hard - one of my little brothers is adopted (he would hit me if he knoew I was calling him "little", he's shorter than me and the baby of our family, who is the tallest) - and I love hin just as much as the brother my mom gave birth to 17 months after we adopted him. Sniff. Maybe I should call him. |