I wish you were still here Neb so you could read this review. That said, your JadeKimVerse stories, this one included are some of the finest works of fan fiction that I've had the pleasure to come across.

It takes time to read your stories, my friend. Not the length, the depth!

I thank you for this roller coaster ride.

A big salute to you for your writing stamina. I don't think I could manage a story this complex.

Wade and Ron both unconscious on the floor, and nobody came along to find them like that? Of course, the silly grins on their faces tell it all.

Even battlesuit "fittings" didn't prepare Wade for the real thing. Any way you look at it, both guys would have died happy right then.

Thank you for taking me from tears of sadness to tears of laughter. I was still choking when I recounted the cause of Wade's agoraphobia to my wife.

Thomas

Neb, I don't know how you wrote this. A piece of me died along with Stephanie. As Wade told the story, I swear, I started to glow blue myself, along with Ron.

I volunteered with the local Distress Line for a time, and never heard anything like that. I've been fortunate in my life.

I have been looking for Stephanie Watership's story.

Thomas

I certainly do enjoy your series yet the one thing I do not understand is the crack about Swedish Meatballs. What is wrong with the food that Disney blatantly singled it out. And I wonder why that chose the literal translation of köttbullar which does literally mean meat cakes instead of the more commom form meat ball which is part of Italian cuisine. Overall the stories are well written just rather confusing at times. For example, this Sarah is not mentioned before unless it is in another story. The intermezzi concept is weird to say the least. PErsonally it is more interesting to have the whole story in one spot. However, the exception the this would be an intermezzi featuring the JossWade relationship on more of a physical MA level but that does not appear to be the point.

Excellent story, excellent series. Very original to use personal journal entries to tell it. Keep up the good work!

A Perfect ending to a perfect story my friend.

But when are we going to see the weddings, and what's going on with two of my favorite cheerleaders, Bonnie & Tara?

other then that it was a great story, I enjoyed every bit of it.

wonderful job bud.

Hi bud, great chapter, let alone very very interesting.

I loved the wedding of Dr. Director Possible and Slim Possible.

Now I just hope that the next chapter not only shows Kim & Ron's wedding, but also Joc and Wades.

Never thought that two such minor characters would become so important.

Once again bud , great chapter.

!1 nice job man really nice, i loved the scene when steph comes and takes the baby with her that was cute! i loved the action and as well everything else! keep up the good work and thanks for the mention, peace out and have a good summer!

Things wrapped up quite nicely. Love always wins out in the end.

My favorite line: “I’ll bet you never expected to end up in your professor’s bedroom, did you, Jennifer?”

Wade IS so bad.

Looks like Wade's seriously po'd. Evildoers beware.

I liked the lecture scene, but the applause was more than a bit clicheed.

I'll never be able to look at software the same way again. The word, not..you know.

Joss must be feeling pretty good about herself: even machines are ogling her! Perhaps not the best choice for a rescue team; the girl starts fires wherever she goes..

Sorry... Nothing like reading this a little late... It was purely unintentional...

I like how you tied everything up here, and finished things up. The "Skunk Trick" is still funny...

Though I just can't picture Joss knitting. She just doesn't seem like she would have the patience for it... But I can see Slim happy to know that Joss might be using her hands for something other than doing things with Wade... *wink*

This was another good arc, and I enjoyed it immensely. Will you be doing anything new anytime soon? Or are you going to stay with this series for a while? (just curious)

Cpneb:

What a ending for this chapter of BE:S.

And I think that this gives a new meaning to "Trail by Fire".

The wedding for Slim and Betty was perfect here, and the "flash" was very well done.

The intro of Joss, Wade, and Ron's "Battle Suits" was done here with a great deal of style. And I liked that Ron's the reverse of Kim's shows, to me anyway, that they are the true diff of Yin-Yang.

I also liked Prof Load in the class sence. "Your worst nightmare" indeed.

Sarah's part was well done here also. Alex and Jen was a good point to add here, and the laughs of Alex giving Wade a reward Kiss was priceless.

Having Wade include the "No One Left Behind" saying of the Armed Forces was a nice touch.

All in all, the perfect ending the Training Table Blues.

I'm looking forward to more from the Jade\Kim world.

Again, wonderfully done.

Star_Eva01

ps,

Thanks for the shout out, and if I can help anytime let me know. It's my honor my friend.

Well, it seems hard to believe that the run is over, and there is only one thing I can do:

Read it all again!

I don't know what I can say that I haven't said a hundred times before. Taking all of this into account, this was just an incredible piece of work. Especially when one remembers that this all began with a single piece- a one shot.

Trust me when I say you earned that Fannie award. Congrats.

Cheers,

DuffKilliganFan

Well, this comes to a close, but there's more to come as some of the 'looking back' suggests while there is already more out in the future taking place.

Well done! Well done!

CB73