I know I'm slowly going through older and older stuff, but this is timelessly classic. I think I like this one the best of everything I've read. It's got a poetry to it that really appeals to me.

Very touching

Beautiful.

I'm still new at this but I can see why Lita Ashlie likes your writing so much. Why do you think Aeris thought, that her death might have been in vain?

Oh...LOVED it! (Brings a tear to my eye...)

Oh my God... That was wonderful. You, AND the story are coming with me to my favorites list! O_O

A very fine job if you asks me...you have a rather interesting way of writting poetry :) keep it up...