Yay~
*Hearts you*
I love this fic! Totally well-built and in-character...and you describe their persona in poems so well *cries*
Hearts Tomomasa-sama too for being so contemplative this time..
Thank you for writing this..
Ganbatte!

A wonderful fanfiction. I really could see Tomomasa having a gift at tanka, when you consider his personality. Each tanka was beautiful and descriptive, and it really captured the personality of its warrior. I especially loved the tanka for Takamichi and Tomomasa.

Beautiful...what a wonderful combination of prose and poetry. Tomomasa would definitely be the one to combine the two. He is a bit of an enigma...the lines you wrote characterize the priestess and the hachiyou perfectly. I like the way you placed each of the pairs together and characterized them in so few words.

truly beautiful, I really love your poetry.

beautiful!