(sniff) That was so sweet. AW

That was a really good story. It was written really well. I thought it was Aragorn who rescued her at first, because you said "man"! It was a great surprise.

I thought it was really sweet at the end because she accepted that Legolas didn't remember her (though it's ironic that a human could remember what an elf can't) because there was a very legitamite (sp?) reason for it. Thanks!

Lovely story! And I like your character very much! Great end too!

heys, i've read my fourth story. :)
so, let me guess, the person in the story is Aragorn? correct me if i'm wrong.
erm, could you do a short small summary on what it's about? it would do me good help, that is, if you want to.

P.S. maybe you could tell more about yourself? that'll be nice. of course, that's is if you want to.

Wow, that ... tht was beautiful, kinda sad, but still - wow.

Nice. Different. My only quibble would be the fact that we never really find out too much about your OC (to be honest, I thought she was male until you said otherwise) - the story focuses mainly on Legolas. She seems to be a rather well-formed character in your mind, so I'd like to know more about her. Other than that, well-written, nice element of mystery, and overall I really liked it.

Cheers!

A great story, as usual from your hand.
You had me thinking the wrong direction twice: First, I thought for the entire story, the OC was a boy, or man at the end, but than you suddenly revealed it was a woman, nice twist.
And about the rescuer: First I thought it had to be Legolas, for who else would think lightely about jumping of those high rocks. But then, after you went on with Minas Tirith and the first seeing of the King, I was sure it had to be Aragorn, but no, thanks to another twist from your side, it was Legolas! Really greatly done.

Love the way the event made such an impression on her life that she always remembered him and his face, yet for him she's one of many woman, not the little child anymore that he saved. Nice how you once again described that for elves 30 years or so was really not long, he barely changed while she had changed a lot.

Hope this makes any sense at all...LOL Never mind if it doesn't ;)

I liked that story! As an immortal, Legolas must have touched an endless number of lives over the years, it was nice to hear from one of them. I wouldn't have forgotten that meeting as well. I think Legolas could really feel a lot of sympathy for that girl's wish not to tell her parents what happened. ;-) I liked that she saw him again later in her life. A beautiful little story, I enjoyed it very much! :)

Tinu

Excellent story. Very well told and original.

Wow! You had me going crazy wondering who saved her/...

Very enjoyable,though as an Aragorn fan, I would have liked him to be the rescuer, but an unexpected twist that works well.

Oh! I love it mellon-nin!

Ahh... the OC... usually such a frustrating and difficult thing to write... at least for me, lol. But I think that you did a great job!

For once... Rebell cannot really think of a thing to say! it's amazing I know... lol...

I could go on and on... but the plain and simple truth is that it's a lovely, well-written one shot that perfectly portrays Legolas's kind nature and also captures the essence of being elven, to live for so long that memories of people you once met fade after so many years... (wo-e that was kinda deep... this is why i don't go into poetry... lol!)

So yes... all in all... I loved it!

(The following is a review sent to my private e-mail.)

The network that I'm on at the moment won't allow me to send reviews (pop-ups), which as you can imagine has been all kinds of inconvenient!

I didn't want to add you lovely new fic to my Favourites List
and not drop you a note about it. It's a lovely piece and I
adored you OC. The guesswork that was involved was such an
exciting element of the story. I had half a mind to believe
that it was Legolas who the woman was talking about but you kept us strung along there, right until the very end. Even your OC had a dash of that. You may have eluded to their gender prior to the end but I didn't pick up on it and it was another nice twist to your (and her;)) tale.

Thank you for sharing this x

You caught me off guard with Legolas, I thought it was Aragorn the whole time.
Wonderfuly witten. Very deep and moving.

Wonderful story! LOL! I pictured the rescuer as Aragorn the entire time! I think I'm in trouble with the Librarians here now because I couldn't stop laughing at my own shock when I found out it was Legolas and not Aragorn! I really enjoyed this story; I hope the Teitho Contest went well with it!
Shelby Rae