Sad, but nicely written fic. Well done! :)

thats really beautiful...great job amy, keep up the good work

Aw I love it. It's sad, but very well-written. Although I can see Dean being stubborn and taking him to the hospital against Sam's wishes. Cute.

the feeling was really good, I would have liked a little more background , but that could just be I have been off the net, my 'puter is sick and i cant get on the internet till December. ttfn

Sad but Phoebe liked it. Good Job!

Phoebe

Aw... That was so sad! You managed to do what you wanted, I really felt like I was there and the scene really brought tears to my eyes ;)

Thanks for this,

Marei

You said a lot in a short piece. The emotion was palpable :) I wish it had been longer ... I love angst. Nice job.

You really need to work on your spelling because that and the lack of apostrophes totally ruined this story for me. While "site" is not mis-spelled you have used it in the wrong context; it should be "sight". Stifled only has one "f" and you've missed out apostrophes: "brother pleading eyes" - should be "brother's". "Wasnt" "Wasn't".

aww