 Btech 2008-09-29 . chapter 6 I must admit, this is a crossover that I never thought I'd see.
I am impressed that you not only managed to write such a crossover in the first place, but that you have managed to do it so well. This story will definitely be going in my favorites, and I look forward to future updates.
On a side note... they don't happen to have any Elemental Battle Armor lying around, do they? |
 rune tobor 2008-01-21 . chapter 6 Very nice story, I really like the personal growth Ranma goes thru.
That growth was lacking in the original series and it hurt the series. Please update as soon as you can. Romance with a non-series girl would be nice but you could do without it. Just extract Ranma from all the old chaos. A book II where Ranma has gone off his new friends could be written. Maybe the old freak comes along too. Perhaps Happy could be cured of his dependence on lust ki. You know if you could combine Kasumi, Akane, Nabiki, Shampoo, Ukyou, and Kodachi, and strip out the worst parts, the resulting girl would be right for Ranma. Kindness, strength, smarts, skill in the art, friendship, singleness of purpose.
Just Keep Writing and Posting. Thanks. |
 Ozzallos 2008-01-04 . chapter 6Glad to see this still up and running. |
 Rignach 2008-01-03 . chapter 6 Great update. Liked it. Happosai surprised me and Ranma really should get rid of his old family, if the are his biological family at all. |
 Dumbledork 2008-01-03 . chapter 6Excellent new chapter. I absolutely love this story. |
 ed 2008-01-03 . chapter 6 Good writing but the content could use some improvement.
The 'good' and 'bad' is too one dimensional. |
 Bobboky 2008-01-02 . chapter 6excellent |
 Hiryo 2008-01-02 . chapter 6Thanks for yet again an absolutely wonderful chapter of yours with many
great interaction and psychological complications I apploud you for those.
Please update soon. |
 Sargon Dorsai 2008-01-02 . chapter 6A very fascinating story. I'm glad to see Ranma finally developing his social skills and turning that analytical mind to something other than Martial Arts. And getting him away from the Tendos. Bout time, though I am sad to see Kasumi as a badguy as well. But thus is life, as they say. And him leaving the Saotome clan, sadly also expected. Happosai agreeing to finally train Ranma? That should be interesting.
While the story is fun and the plot entertaining, the writing is a bit rough. I would suggest getting a prereader to go over your work and help it flow a little better. |
 moritynz 2008-01-01 . chapter 6The speech and writing is rather stiff and forced in most area's, it doesnt have to be written like some formal document, its a story let it flow like one. Otherwise its going well. Looking forward to your next update |
 backlash5 2008-01-01 . chapter 6love this story, I can't seem to get enough of this. you have a good pace in this story, don't lose it. please update soon |
 Nysk 2008-01-01 . chapter 6Glad to see an update to this story, and a well written one at that.
Only comment, spelling.
I look forward to more. |
 Rose1948 2008-01-01 . chapter 6Another nice chapter! Sorry about your computer crashing and all ::comfles:: I know how painful that can be. |
 The Thirteenth Truth 2008-01-01 . chapter 6Excellent story, I wait for the next chapter and wish to see what happens. |
 Pyeknu 2008-01-01 . chapter 6Very nice story so far. I see you're wanting to take your time with it, and it was certainly worth the wait. I hope to see more soon, especially since I want to see what happens now to the dunderhead brigade (read: the Saotomes and the Tendous) in the wake of Ranma's walking out on them once and for all.
Cheers! |