hey

i love you story please more

Sweet story. I laughed out loud when I read the last line.

Nice work with this. i quite liked it :D congrats

hey!
I love this, hope ya dont mind me adding this to my c2...:)
i was wondering why i didnt see this before...anyway im glad i saw it...
you deserve more reviews!
its really good!
hope ya write more of this ships...:D*hint hint*

-mj(wgf)

I would recommend going over your spelling and grammar. It makes for slower reading when it's there... And there's quite a bit the spell check can fix for you if you don't have someone to proof read it for you;)

I loved it it was great!!

Aw! briliant story! loved it soo much! great job your an awesome writer!

If I liked it? Oh my god, it was great! :)

I loved the explanation of Lindsay's past - is really believable and it covers most of the hints that had been given on the episodes. You handled it really good. :) Congrats!