Only one word, OMG!

Argh, you really played with my mind in the last chapter and in this one! Cause in last chapter, it was almost obvious that Gaara killed Sakura, and then, in this chapter, we find that it wasn't like that. Really, that was cruel of you! You also played with poors Gaara's mind!

This so called 'crackfic' really is one!! But in the good way! I just adore your writing style! Really good, very good idea for a story, it's two am in the morning, it means I have to go and sleep (and when I sleep, I dream), thanks tomorrow (or today technically) is a holiday till saturday, so yay... I 'll be finishing this story tomorrow (today, later). I feel so sorry for Gaara, he has such a sweet heart in his own way in this fic; and Sakura plays with it, BAD! BAD GIRL! She makes me thinks somehow, of Madonna's song 'Bad Girl'.

I'ma gunna have to review on this chapter, cuz I can only do one review per chapter >.>

I've just reread this, forgetting what an awesome end it has. I just wanna say that it's an awesome story. And I had a thrill reading it again. Oh, and you're welcome for the help with the ending ^^

~OneKnux~

Woah...so confusing..im lost.

awe i was hoping the baby would be Gaaras but i suppose thats not the case now that i read it, but im glad they got together and are happy Gaara is the daddy, thats very sweet of him to be like that, and im kind of glad sasuke died he can be annoying with all of his issues and whineyness all in al i very much enjoyed reading this story

I know this review is like a billion years late, but i like this story and i just stumbled across it =D Im on chapter 3 now so im still in the confused part, but its got a weird insomniac fightclub vibe to it i like it its exciting

My all time favorite Gaara Sakura fic.

wow... a really emotional fic. I didn't get the part that Sasuke died though... how did he die and did he loe Sakura in the end? and did sakura loved him? and who does she love more? Gaara or Sasuke? wah... questions that are haunting my head...

Damn! How can I continue like this? this is really confusing and... I've expected a better chapter! From the beginning when I saw that it's a lemon, I've got a bad feeling.. But I never thought it will be THAT bad.. I'm sorry to tell you this.. but I really loved ur fic...

Hmm...I stuck with this story because I was lacking in GaaSaku recently, but...I dunno. I know you were going for an interesting avant-garde writing style here, but I think you missed the mark--it ended up being kind of muddling and confusing, which is not something you want for your readers generally, unless they are supposed to be reading your works while taking acid or something. Stream of consciousness is all well and good at times, but a somewhat more linear format would have improved the story rather than trying to make it "artsy and compellingly mysterious."
Also, you did not particularly leave it as clearly as you might think regarding Sakura's feelings--from what I have read you have tried to put her with Gaara and yet Sasuke encroached too far into things and thus at the end he had to die so she was conveniently able to raise the child with now-husband Gaara. Oh, and NOW she loves him. Poor Gaara, he doesn't deserve to be second best to that bastard.

Hi! I was previously known as Bloody Red Vampire. I got bored so I changed my penname! I am very happy with the outcome! Gaara and sakura are together! I do feel a little bad that sasuke died but I guess that's the way that it has to go! Thanks for the response in the story! Ya know haow a toldme ya likedd whatI wrote? Thankyou! No one really ever thanked me.I'm blabbering now1 Thanks,yeah!

saddest ending ever. Loved it.

omg...so it's finally come to an end =[[

that was...so great. like, its one of those fanfics that are so horribly painfully heartbreaking that you HAVE TO LOVE IT. its an amazing story, and it ended fine =D

and lol i wasnt "** off" perce, but always so full of emotion every time i read the next damn chapter!

great story, i'll always love it =D

Are you kidding me>< that was an awesome ending!! XD this is such a good fic! yay for being an update **!! hee hee XXD

~*Daniela*~