Reviews for New Beginnings and Old Tree Houses

Reviews For: New Beginnings and Old Tree Houses - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

orakelin 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abuseAw! Loved it:)
Siriusly Megara 2008-06-05 ch 1,	abusethat was super awesome!
Clairful 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseLoved it! I demand a sequel!
Love. 2007-11-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. I love you.
little dumpling 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abuseSo i have maybe read your story 2-3 times now, and i have to say out of all the stories i have ever read on this site, this one is maybe one of my favorites. wonderfully done! well written with a wonderful storyline! i am quite impressed, and very much enjoyed your unusual pairing. Well done!
RWFDHF 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseloved this fic loved it ..hope u write more on this couple cause its practicallyy non-existant
Crumpled Piece Of Paper 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseOh my, I daresay I've fallin in love. XD Now I simply scrave unusual pairings (Minerva and Mrs. Norris!? wtfyes!) So of course when I spotted this I was all: omg!mustreadLIEK,NOW!!1!lolz And I was really suprised at what I found. Unfourtunately. being a hoarder of strange pairings and ships makes for stumbling across some of the worst fanfiction pancakes imaginable. You see, nobody's IC, everything's over-detailed and under-dialouged and with a simply tangled mess of a plot, Or, on the flip side, their shadows, outlines of a fanfiction, just bits and peices that never come together or make any sense. Dialouge is robotic and mandatory for dragging the long-dead plot along and confessing undying love from one character to the other. I'm happy to say that your fanfiction is one of the one's that can be found along the edge, set away in a small little pocket of individuality and uniqueness. You write these characters so well it makes your readers feel like they were right there, idly observing everything from their imaginations, adding in our own details where you didn't describe them, all together personalizing the story into something each reader can see in their own way. Keep up the awesome writing, and I'll be sure to hunt your fics down and compare them to pancakes. XD Much love, CPOP
CSebastiene 2007-07-13 ch 1,	abuseThank you so much for this wonderful one-shot! Ron & Remus, what a wonderful pairing! And this entire story was so well-written. I absolutely adored it. You had me smiling and teary-eyed all at once. Quite an accomplishment, I should say. When Remus isspeaking to Carolyn about losing someone you love.. I had tears streaming down my cheeks. I lost my grandmother seven years ago, when I was thirteen, and I've often feared that I'm forgetting her. Remus was speaking to Carolyn, but he was also speaking to me. In the back of my mind, I've told myself those same words thousands of times, but you managed, through Remus, to drive them home. This was very poignant, and I love how Remus and Roncame together. The scene where Ron tells Remus that he wants him to stay was incredibly cute. Thank you for sharing your talents with us readers. ~C. Sebastiene (Seba)
Paranoid Sarcasm 2007-07-06 ch 1,	abusePrefection! I feel as though I can love again. Oh, my broken heart rebuilds in the sugary fluff. This was brilliant. I can'tnot love it. Very well done, I'm certainly adding this to my Favorites list. Peace and Love
AccioRemus 2007-04-12 ch 1,	abuseWhat a great story. There aren't many stories anymore that I finish and think it's one of my all time favorites but this one is. Remus is very in character.
evil-mastermind666 2007-02-08 ch 1,	abuseI like how you brought it back around to the line: "Poor Remus never stood a chance". :) Very cute! I like how they grew as a family together. Fab!
A. Hailan 2007-01-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseAn extremely unlikely pairing and now you've written one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've had the pleasure of reading, so I'm stuck liking the redhead with werewolf. How in the world am I supposed to find a decent RonxRemus, let alone another great one, now that I suffer the craving? The cruelty. ...But I'm a masochist. In all honesty, I loved this fic. It was so warm, and understated - but what really got to me was how natural it all seemed. You didn't force anything. None of the characters were contrived; you didn't turn the twins into a gag, or feature Carolyn too much and too directly as to make her some sort of martyr to her backstory. Instead, it was easy to truly sympathize with her and want her to adjust and be happy. Not overly angsty with Remus, and it was wonderful to not have him argue against the right choice! As for Ron - well, I... "didn't have a chance" either =) And your writing- so good. Excellent diction and description. You don't waste anything by describing outifts or rooms. You point out a few details that really summarize the setting, character, or mood, and you never fall into cliched phrases. Your dialogue is also a joy to read: not forced, not drawn out, in-character, and it moves at a nice pace. Your writing really encapsules a world, instead of acting out a show by propping elements up on a stage the way most fiction does. I'll hush now. But really, you've satisfied both the fangirl and the critical reader in me. Thank you >^..^
Scarlet Storm 2006-12-10 ch 1,	abusethat was so freaking cute. i loved it.
Memeal 2006-11-26 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful.. simply and utterly beautiful. I love the conversation between Ron and Remus at the end - all broken sentences and assumptive phrases.. yet they're connecting. Gorgeous!
krl25 2006-11-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseUhm, amazing! I wasn't sure it could be done well-- but alas, you've written a completely comprehensible and AMAZING Ron&Remus piece!! Kudos to you! I LOVED it!

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