Argh, it's so heartbreaking sometimes...especially when one thinks of the parallel between Kenpachi and Yachiru and Kurotsuchi and Nemu. :/

That was freaking awesome! I like how you write. It doesn't have too much description or too much dialog.

This has to be the best Zaraki I have ever read.

Really entertaining! I like your characterisations of everyone, they were really well represented. I kind of felt bad for Nemu, but not so much so that the story became depressing. And Zaraki was well done- I kind of like the way you portrayed him. Odd methods, but telling Nemu she wasn't weak was so nice.

Keep up the good work!

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Okay, that WAS sweet.

Could you keep going with the Kenpachi/Nemu thing? I kinda like it.

*sigs*...nemu

I love stories about Nemu, and this one was especially good. You really managed to pull off the interaction between Zaraki and her very well. Great work!

You really seem to *know* Zaraki very well and it shows...it's like all the other characters can bounce off him some how and come off the better for it.

Nice, I hope you write more about those two

Very well-written.

I wanna see more of these chara's, you play them out excellently :3

Yes! More Zaraki/Nemu! I love it when you write the two of them interacting, because they have such opposite personalities, and we all know that Kenpachi's got a soft spot for cute girls.

im gonna cry T.T

you know what, even if you say mayuri is hard to write, i personally think that you write, zaraki, yachiru, mayuri and nemu the best. Those always turn out to be my favorite story. and i loved this whole kenpachi being nice to nemu in his own way thing.

this has got to be one of you best pieces, i love it!

That's very good, I liked it a lot. Kenpachi rules!

wow great story. Even though it's a one shot, you put a lot of thought into and could easily be continued.

Of course you wrote Ken perfect and it's awesome

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