  -WhitePhoenixFalling- 2007-10-30 . chapter 1This is really good! I always wanted Sheena & Zelos to get together in the game, even though it's really implied at the end. I wanna read a really good one about Kratos & Anna too. |
| Cyberchao X 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 Hilarious. |
| Social Nemesis 2007-02-28 . chapter 1 I really like this fic (adds to favorites =3)! You effectively built up tension in the readers (or at least me anyways XD), and I liked it, wondering if Sheena would really go. I also liked Zelos' way of talking throughout the fic. One more thing I liked was:
"'My maiden aunt's mind is vicious.' (Don't know where I came up with this one. I don't even have an aunt.)"
O.o I've never seen a line like this before, and I must say, even though it doesn't make sense, it's a cool line! =3
Anyways, nice fic overall!
Sincerely,
The Firestorm Strain. |
| Cozette Wilder 2007-01-26 . chapter 1 aw that was so cute. good job! |
| -XSageX- 2007-01-19 . chapter 1 I Loved it because it was very romantic and i think u should me more stories like this. Like continue this one |
| Nayru-chan 2006-12-22 . chapter 1 Lovely fic. ^^ Sheelos 4ever. ^^ |
| Jenna Wilder 2006-12-12 . chapter 1 *giggles about Zelos' comb* Nice. It's been forever since I heard this song, though... I need to listen to it again. >__< *bounces off to find it* Whee! |
| Arctic Husky 2006-11-18 . chapter 1 Y'know, I have never heard of that song before... I think I need to listen to it now. xD
Anyway, this was a really cute fic! Although, because so much of the dialogue rhymed (song lyrics, I'd imagine), I couldn't help but picture the two of them singing most of the time. ^^; And a couple of the lines just really didn't fit in, which you seem to have acknowledged but included nonetheless. I guess with most of the dialogue rhyming, it would be weird for the flow to randomly stop, wouldn't it?
I really liked the descriptions that you put into this story, though. Even though the song lyrics took up a major part of the story, you also added your own touches so that the lyrics weren't the only focus. You did a great job! |
| ArissaMay 2006-11-16 . chapter 1 This was a pretty good story. =D Their words, most of them at least, were from the song, right? If so, that works out fine, but otherwise, I wouldn't see Zelos saying 'swell'. |
| Faux Promises 2006-11-16 . chapter 1 Gawd, that is my favorite Christmas song. xD Along with Let it Snow. Romantic and stuff~
~Kitsy |
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