 Zhandra01 2009-11-28 . chapter 33Hi *waves*
I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.
Good luck & happy muses
Zhan |
 Cakeat 2009-11-28 . chapter 33Ah, 2 to 3 more chapters to go yet I still feel like its a long way to go...
I somehow find this very depressing but also rewarding. Reading this fic is like climbing a mountain without stopping. I hope to reach the top where I can bask in the pure love and romance that L and Light would share but that does not seem to be the case. I am quite discouraged by the fact that Light won't ever return L's affect and love. Though that is only because I believe in true love myself.
Your writing skills are truly great, I enjoyed reading this story but also am sadden by it. It takes readers through a journey and even unmask the deadly truth that Light will never change no matter how many chances he is given. Even so, I believe that people can change and love is the ultimate source of power to carry us through trouble.
I look forward to see what happens next :) |
 arsg66 2009-11-27 . chapter 33 My anxious waiting has paid off! I'm truly glad to see an update. I felt like a dog whose master just got home. If that makes any sense haha. |
 BloodRaevynn 2009-11-27 . chapter 33Good, as always; you have some spelling and grammar errors scattered about though. For example, "immunity system" should be "immune system" and wounds don't "cure" they "heal."
I feel the need to mention that it's not possible for L's entire method of cutting his hair to be just putting it in a ponytail and chopping it; if he did that, it would be long in the front (past his collarbone) and short in the back.
Since you brought it up, it bears mentioning that based on the behaviors he exhibits, _any_ specialist qualified to do so would diagnose L with Asperger's Syndrome immediately. In fact, he has more symptoms than I or any other adult I've met with AS. |
 yellowrose87 2009-11-26 . chapter 33I am so glad to see this story updated again!! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 perfidiouspink 2009-11-26 . chapter 33Great chapter, I love the depth to this story. Thanks for updating. I will definitely keep reading. |
 HereIGoAgain 2009-11-26 . chapter 33Oh my gosh, almost finished with the story? That makes me sad but happy at the same time. I adore this story, it's my favorite LxLight one on FF. I just...i ADORE you're portrayal of L. It's absolutely perfect.
“Yes, but I like the pear ones,” L said, stressing the ‘I’ part. “Those belong to me, but you can have the clear ones as they are confused and do not know what they are supposed to taste like. Here.” L handed him one of the confused clear ones.
XD Haha, that's a win. And him being allergic to stupid people. Love it. |
 Nardaviel 2009-11-25 . chapter 33Oh, wow, an update. :D Your chapters are always worth waiting for, dear. I have no idea how they manage to be so hilariously funny while still making me cry, but it's a gift. Keep being awesome~ |
 LynLin 2009-11-25 . chapter 33I still love this story, no matter how long the wait. Thank you for continuing to write this. I love the balance between the sweet fluff and horribly terrible angst. <3 Fantastic. Thank you. |
 firedraygon 2009-11-25 . chapter 33This is one of my favourite DN fics, haha. It's got so much going on! L angsting about loving someone who might never love him back, the happy bits with L and Raito bantering, L feeling left out because Raito doesn't listen to him but listens to Wammy...! So fun. Excellent work with this. I'm looking forward to how you wrap things up within the new few chapters! Please write more soon~
~fd97 |
 Serria 2009-11-25 . chapter 33Wow, I'd always been hoping to see more from this fic! This chapter was charming... though L's reflection on the torture made me wince. I kind of wonder where you're going from here. Not that I don't adore these Wammy's House chapters, but the first half of the story was action packed with plot... are we focusing now just on relationship development? It's quite domestic in comparison! I'm hoping there will be a climactic moment where Light loves L, but it also seems like that alone can't sum up the whole story. When you say the fic will wrap up in a few more chapters, I'm pulling out my hair to try to figure out how you'll end this epic story. I started reading this years ago, at the beginning, when I first got into this fandom and every new chapter made me stop what I was doing and rush to open it, my heart beating like a madwoman. Haha, your writing has improved since then, if I may say so. (Though in this chapter, I think "immunity system" is supposed to be "immune system", at least in American English..) But your characterization of both is as charming, cruel and spot on as ever. I don't know how you manage to think of these little lines they say, that seem so witty and perfect, but I certainly admire it. |
 4udball 2009-11-25 . chapter 33I don't know if I've reviewed before, but I if I haven't--I want to let you know that this is the best Death Note story I have ever read. I've been reading and critiquing Death Note fiction for quite a while, and Coexistence is Boredom has one of the most complex and exciting plots, realistic prose, and intense psychological aspects. It's perfect.
You're at the top of Captive, A Tithe to Hell, Poison Apple, SIlence, Vitamin B, The Sugar Cube Fort, Phlegethon River, Concerto in D Minor and A Balm for Social Failure (I consider those the crowns of ).
Anyway, I'm very happy that you've updated! I almost gave up hope for its completion, but I see that you have not abandoned it. Thank you!
I was getting a bit depressed with all of Light's cruelty, but you've managed to soften him without doing it excessively, which is very pleasing. I find myself very much hoping for a happy ending, and I'm quite the advocate for tragedy.
Comparatively, this chapter has more mechanical errors (spelling, grammar) then your previous ones. I'm not sure if you were in a hurry to post or not, but the mistakes were noticeable this time around.
This chapter was a great break in the tense atmosphere. Last chapter accomplished that somewhat as well, but this one really made things light and comfortable. I'm glad that you've decided on a break from the intensity. I look forward to what will come in the climax, though, and I can only imagine the intensity that will have!
And L trying to cut his own hair was hilarious. I really enjoyed how you painted that--L wasn't self-conscious like he's usually portrayed (regarding his looks), and actually considered his haircut fine (or else didn't care about it). You've really captured his aesthetic carelessness.
These one really made me laugh:
“You don’t walk around with a briefcase of chloroform and a detachable sniper rifle. Plus he asked nicely.”
“Why is there a pile of familiar black hair under the bathroom rug?”
“L, seriously?”
"Though it would be nice if you wore that remorseful expression every time you did. I’d probably have sex with you more.”
Masterfully done! |
 fouloldron 2009-11-25 . chapter 33Another good chapter.
I spotted to errors in word choice, but can now only remember the ergo instead of ego one. ><
Sorry. Ergo means thus, Ego means I, or one's pride.
Thanks for the interesting update. :) |
 Turtle Kid 2009-11-25 . chapter 33Two or three more chapters! Wow. . . . Before you said that, I'd never imagined this story ending. It just doesn't seem like it could--instead, if would follow the rest of their lives. I suppose that would be draining to you, though. At any rate, I like this chapter. When L and Raito fight, even verbally, it's like violent poetry in motion. |
 Kelayoh 2009-11-25 . chapter 33So I've been following this story for close to two years now, I suppose. And though I've pretty much gone AWOL from the Death Note fandom completely these days, I've never stopped loving your fic and highly anticipating its updates. I really wish this story would never end. To know there are only a month of updates left makes me very sad indeed. Please keep writing for Death Note... I'd imagine a story about B by yourself would be almost too good to handle. Haha.
Anyway, cheers, and great update. The way you made it look as though L was being genuinely thoughtful about the red candy at first turned into such a hilarious twist. And I love these ponderous, quiet moments between them as much as any driving plot you create. |
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