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Keith Kurogane
2009-04-02 . chapter 7
"Whoever wins, Instrumentality loses..."

CLASSIC!
kyugan
2009-03-28 . chapter 7
Thanks for the call out pal, I appreciate it.

This is not turning out to be a good century for Keel Lorenz is it?

First Adam gets nuked, which not only prevents 2nd impact, but cancels the evangelion project.

Then Godzilla wakes up, probably because of hearing about the poser passing himself off as him stateside, and decides to remind the world that Tokyo is HIS **.

Then Gouki, who was already uber-badass, becomes the latest Ultraman...only without the gay-** costume.

Lol, Ryu versus Ultra Gouki...

Ryu:...WTF?!?!??!?!
Ken: Oh High holy **...
Gen: Chinese expletive...
Bison: *running like mad*
Dan: YOSH! I CHALLENGE YOU!

I love Dan, he's so stupid it's funny.

Keep up the good work...maybe I'll try and do other scenes as well!
Uppgreyedd
2009-03-25 . chapter 7
Oh my God! You've updated! Great as usual, and nice reference to the previous chapters (and to the previous fic).

As for suggestions, I agree with the guy below about a Guilty Gear crossover. Instead of Sol, perhaps he takes on the Commander Gear Justice herself?

Or Darkstalkers, where he confronts Pyron, or Demitri, or - GASP! - Morrigan.

Or Mortal Kombat, where he interrupts the first tournament - pretty much like SF 2 - and Shun Goku Satsu's Shang Tsung and faces Liu Kang.

Then there's King of Fighters, what with the whole scenario CvSNK 2, where he confronts Rugal...
Demo-nisshu jinketsu Duke
2009-02-03 . chapter 6
Nice. hey i got an idea for you. Sol badguy, kenpachi zaraki and Gouki...three way battle!
GalaxyFalcon
2008-12-23 . chapter 6
Cheap shots at Geese Howard and Strider? AWESOME! (even if I do love Hiryu and his awesome tonfa-sword.)
Steamrollers Solve All
2007-07-06 . chapter 6
Cheap shots at Geese and Strider... *shakes fist at Gouki*

Dio Brando: Give me FIVE seconds. I drop a steamroller on him and it's over.

A steamroller won't be enough. That'll just make him mad.

Dio: Dammit.
Steamrollers Solve All
2007-07-06 . chapter 5
I can see Gouki in a book store, giving autographs to fans of his epic book series... "The time that Gouki killed (person)".

Gouki: And you know what the best part is? *waves a Flux Capacitor in front of Bison, Manfred, Pyron, and Doctor Wily*
Wily/Manfred/Bison/Pyron: GOUKI, YOU BASTARD!
xXBleachedSpartanXx
2007-06-24 . chapter 6
O-oh...man.

-trembles with glee-

You have taken all that is good in the world, and meshed them together into this awesome chapter.

I cannot live without your updates! I feel empty inside when there is none.

"Did that box just move?"

Just the notion of Gouki standing there, blinking owlishly makes my day all the more brighter.

Thank you!
Gone Away 2345
2007-06-23 . chapter 6
This ending was so full of lolz. I really liked it!
Lizard Valis
2007-06-23 . chapter 6
Hi, I'm the unsigned Lezard Valeth. I'll be reviewing with this nick from now on.

Gouki Vs Snake O_O? Completely original. *Give a 100% rating for the author's creativity*.
Gone Away 2345
2007-04-25 . chapter 5
Rofl, Back to the Future?!

Oh man, this story gets weirder and weirder...XP
claymade
2007-04-24 . chapter 5
Heh heh, well, when explaining canon divergences, time travel is a time-honored option... An interesting mix of crossovers in this one--seeing Gouki interact with the Back to the Future people was quite fun, and Gouki's reaction to the train itself I thought was very well done.
xXBleachedSpartanXx
2007-04-23 . chapter 5
Oh, rofflecopter!

That. Was. Super.

The train part took several seconds to sink in. But, the line "You will make time." made everything fit before I read the next sentences.

I honestly saw this playing out in my head as I read on. I love the pure ridiculous yet possible notions of it all.

Love it.

But, yesh, Gouki certainly should lurk moar.
Lezard Valeth
2007-04-22 . chapter 5
That was funny but short. Post more please.
Aiwethryne
2007-03-31 . chapter 4
(After reading your profile) Woot to all Filippinos! We kick ** and pwn you all! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! ...Anyway, your fic is interesting, to the least.
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