[“They have a mind of their own. But either way you’re a heartless and you’re going down.” replied Sora.

“A WHAT?!”,asked the half-demon.

“Don’t act dumb! You’re a heartless!” screamed out Donald in anger.

“No! I’m not anything! I’m trying to destroy these things!!”, screamed out the half-demon.

“Yeah right”, said Sora.

“Really,” assured the half-demon angrily as he finished off the last heartless. Just the three of them were left.Sora and his friends assumed their battle positions.

“Fine…we’ll take you out…the hard way!” Sora screamed out.]
I don't know who it is but either him or Sora and co are gunna get owned o-o
(My guess is Inuyasha. Am I right? o-o)

Hi I was reading your Kingdom Hearts:Anime Crossovers and I was wondering if you can do more Chapters if you would be so kind please I got to know how it ends.Thank you.

I like this, please continue it, however please make the chapters a bit longer please, I read everything in the story for about only 5 minutes and finished it.

nice

pretty good, cant wait for the next chapter!

Ah, now we get to the cross-breeding. Anyways, this and past chapters have been pretty short, and this one felt kinda rushed. You just went straight to the cave and nothing else. Maybe in future entries you put a little more meat in your expostition. And once and for all, Heartless is capitalized. Just so you know.

Oh! Tender! Naraku would make for a very killer KH boss! The way you're putting things the Inuyasha realm really could be a part of the KH universe. In other words, a pleasant bit of story progression. But you are still retaining your problems of capitalization, spacing, and the occasional funky sentence. Please improve: I wouldn't want any awesome boss fights scarred by little mistakes like those!

How dare you leave me hanging like this!! Meh, I still would've kept reading ixnay the cliff hanger. And yeah, I can definitely see this chance meeting actually happening in the KH universe. Yet I have a pretty good feeling Inuyasha is gonna get all Leon on the heroes' hineys, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Now for the gripes: Spacing, capitalization, and one of the earlier sentences ended badly. Try to take care of those.

Hm. Another short chapter. But hopefully you're right about he real adventure starting in the next one. Anyways, there were spacing errors again. It's starting to seem commonplace now. But this being your first story, I guess it could be expected.

This was a pretty short chapter, but a mostly clean one. You still had some minor spelling and capitalization errors but nothing serious. And I like how you're setting up this new adventure. That's good, since good explanations are key to an effective story. Remember that.

Pretty neat for a first-timer. The whole set-up and flashback thing was a nice touch, and overall your ideas were very clear. Yet there were your little bad habits: Forgetting to double-space, grammar, capitalizations, maybe some spelling. Still, I say you did pretty good with this one. I'll be looking forward to whatever you have in store. Oh, and about the length, it was a tad long, but it's always good to have plenty of substance in your works, just so long as most of it deals with the main story.

this is a very good story but it could be longer.

great story! update soon!

great story! update soon!

The story seems like a good idea, but the thing that really bugs me is the SCREAMING SCREAMING SCREAMING! There are different forms of the word screaming, like yell, call, shout... Break out a thesaurus, please. Other than that, I think everything is pretty much okay. Keep up the good work!

-Frost