Loved the beginning! "Which meant he had died. Again." Cracked me up ;) nice work!

It's cute, and I hope you'll continue it.

Oh my gosh, that was so cute! I really love how it ends. So short and sweet, leaves things up to the imagination of the viewer. Did you intend for it to be that way? Or was there supposed to be a continuation? Lovely, either way. I absolutely love how you wrote Homunculus' lines. Perfectly in character. Good job!

And by the way, thank you for writing a fic on SoD. There's not enough love for it out there!

Great fic XD

Nice fic. You could probably have gotten away with rating it PG, though (or K or whatever it's called now)-it's only innuendo. :)

"Except the water decided suddenly to be made out of stone and jumped at the chance to be an accessory to murder." I love that *laughs* This is beginning nicely, please write more. _

creepy, but good. creepy...

Write more SOD! Please!

YES! FINALLY ANOTHER SOD FANFICTION!

This one's really good-I can't wait until I read more! You did a fantastic job!