Haha! I love it! Especially the ending when Kanda was embarrassed =^w^=

ahh u made this based from D-Gray Man #2 ne?! i luv this version of yours :D

'Kanda... can you be my big brother? Guardian, family... anything? It'll be so nice to have one--'
kanda : "be my lover then!" grab Allen & kissed him senseless XD

hahaha that's just some stupid magination of mine, hope u dun mind lol! anyway hope u'll write D Gray man more!! keep it up :D

Cool and Sweet! ^-^b
I like it, really ^o^v

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Kaya-chan

wow, really good, i think i will cheack your other stuff now.

Thats so sweet. TT_TT KandaxAmmen is cute. The annoying love type. He he

*Claps* cute!

HAI THE STORY IS WONDERFUL

Kya! Cuteness!! XD *starts destroying things due to excessive excitement*

Awh... that's cute...

Although it's kinda rushed (the events come and go so quickly) I liked it- Allen was so squishie toward the end. xD He's such a kid. Lol. But anyway! I like the interaction and all...really cute. :)

so good!!
i loved the interactions between allen and kanda, especially the final part, allen crying for kanda when he almost died.