I stumbled upon your story while searching to see if anyone had any factual info on the undergrounds of the famed 'paris opera house' as I have been a fan of phantom of the opera since childhood, and the idea of a lake under an opera house still facinates me :)
I liked your story very much... seemed a bit rushed at the end though, almost the feeling one would get if watching a half hour television series of hell boy. But if that's what you were after, then bravo! Very creative, and I enjoyed seeing two sci-fis that I enjoy mixed together in a story. Thank you for the diversion!
kat

I suggest you make a sequel. That would be fantastic! And much apreciated. Maybe you did already. I'm gonna look on your profile for it. If you didn't, you should make one. If you did, I shall be reviewing it in a short amount of time.

I can honestly say the idea of the siren is pretty good. Although, i would delve more into her origins and anatomy if you continue. Oh- and just 2 suggeastions. 1- If she's over a hundred years old, and used to socioty as it was quite a while ago, have her talk more like people would have then, and not say so many things like "awesome". 2- Please, PLEASE, don't have her and Abe fall in love. Every other Hellboy fanfic writer EVER does that with their new character, just because Abe doesn't have a love interest.

That's all- hope you take my comments into consideration.
~Amy

This was highly entertaining. I loved it.

Somehow, though, I can't see Erik keeping such a perky siren anywhere near his dreary home. That just made the story more amusing.

Very good!

Very well written and entertaining!
Unfortunately, I only know Hellboy from the movie, but Abe is definitely my favorite character!
Hope you have a sequel with Siren!

I loved your storie, it was awsome. Siren seems a little to hyper and cant keep her hands to her self. But she also is like me, a little. I would like to see her again. Again congrats on your storie, I loved it. XD

Wow, I really like this. This goes automatically to my favorites. I love the Phantom of the Opera and I love Abe, and Hellboy in general!

You rock!

Cute story. Yes, I for one would like to see more. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Great update. The interaction between Abe and the Siren was very sweet. Sorry I've taken so long to read this. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks, Beth Palladino

I would definitly LOVE to see more of the Siren! She could be a good friend for Abe...I can just see them now. *day dreams* More Please! I love how you combined the Phantom of the Opera with Hellboy, and I especially loved the ending. The meeting between the Siren and Erik was so sweet, and I loved the part where she accidently hugged the girl in glasses. Overall, a wonderfully written story! *adds to favorites* Thanks for a great read!

Love the humor! I expected a monster, or Erik armed with a knife to attack Abe, and instead it's a bubbly happy Siren! Great job with the suspense!

Excellent writing, your decriptions are wonderful, I can picture everything! I really like the humor you've thrown in, too, especially the part about 'what could possibly go wrong?'

*wide eyes
write more about Siren!
(and can you give me advice on my story, it's my first Hellboy fic and you are a good writer. it's called Thelodus and i just updated it so it should be on the first page of the Hellboy section)

this really is a good story, even your ocs have interesting stories. i hope you keep writing, i think you have a great OC to go to the BPRD in this story, that is if nothing happens to the siren. not specifically a romance OC, just a great other character you could add to Hellboy in a fanfiction. keep writing!
-H. Valentine

this is awsome! i love the combination of Hellboy and Phantom of the Opera, that actually works if you think about it. your writing style is amazing and i love how you don't focus too hard on your OCs, they're just like other characters while the main one is Abe. keep writing soon! (I'm writing an Abe story too...)
-H. Valentine