If i didn't know better I would say you were Eion Colfer's kid. Anyway, who the heck are Ellen and Artemis I. I need explination!

If you still haven't thought of a relationship yet i would sugest having Artemis lean toward Holly but have nothing serious happen.

You might want to edit "Artemis fowl I" into Myles Fowl- considering the latter's IQ, you'd just need tochange the name. Also, you should change Mooren to a slightly lower rank-Trouble is the commander at the time of this story. Or, offer an explanation for why Trouble has been demoted/hasn't been promoted yet.

A very well written, well structured story: needless to say, I'm hooked!

Any chance of an update soon?

The Doctor

P.S. I realize it's been a year since you began looking for a beta, and no doubt you've probably already got one, but if you haven't, I'd be more than happy to beta for your story! If not a beta, how about a second opinion? Third? :-D

Ew... that whole decomposing bodies thing was kinda gross... /shudders/ Can't even begin to imagine what that would look like. Plz update soon!

It's always such a good feeling when you come across a well-written fic like yours. Your style is very much like Eoin Colfer's. Look forward to the next update and hopefully exams and manga/anime addictions won't cause so many problems this time! :)

omg she's looking for Artemis? tht was so unexpected!
great story, i can't wait for the update.
oh BTW if you still need a BETA, im glad to do it. I don't have any work on cause i cant finish a story to save my life, but i have beta'd for plenty of my friends, so I'd love to help with this story if you want it. Message me back if your interested!

Please update! (sigh) C'mon, Know My Dark, you've GOT to update. And I don't see everyone's problem with Minerva. I personally like her. And Holly is WAY to old, AND not even his same species! But it's your choice. If you update. ;p

OK. First of all, I used to be Infinity, but now I'm Master of Time! just so you're not confused. I love your work Know My Dark, and you need to continue this story. It's very good, well written, and it would be a shame not to finish it. And, oh heck I'm going out of my mind with the suspense! Just update OK? :)

I've seen this fic before and I did not review... but now I am impressed enough (and I actually have the time) to review this story!

So far, VERY good. Nice portrayal of Minerva-you've avoided the whole bimbo-Minerva thing that was kind of around in LC. About ships, I'd say don't put any in-the category isn't romance, and keep it that way. It's fine the way it is. (But then again, I'm a diehard R/V fan, a H/T fan and a A/H disliker. I never really did get the A/M thing though...)

Niceness with Vinyaya too!

Neat, plausible plot... keep going in there!

UPDATE ALREADY!

Ah! I can't wait for the next chapter. However, if Vinyaya suposedly liked Root, and was already on the council, she probably was in the academy more then 100 years ago, because 100 years isn't long by fairy standards. I thought she would be older. That's all. Great story!

OMFG! What an awesome story! I can't wait for the next one, so I hope you type really fast, or else you'll find a very annoyed someone banging on your ddoor in the next week or so! Or not, because i have no idea hwere you live.

This is a really good story!! You write in the same style as Eoin Colfer. Keep writing.

great so far... but really dout that artemis would oversee a soo crusial thing in chees...

but really great.

and dont let foaly crash my com... not agien... :)