How could you do that to them!

I don't get it

Wtf

I love FEMSLASH, and this really likes me, except for the end. Maybe, you should extend the story... it was good!

I saw your profile and you need to practice spanish more because I didn't undestand and it's my first language.. whatever, era una buena historia para dejarla simplemente como oneshot. Adios!

Not bad.

A very cute story.

Very cute, this was the orginal Powerpuff Girls correct? Ok, very good plot, and a good chacterization of Bubbles, but there were a few grammtical mistakes and spelling mistakes.

Geuss is spelt Guess, as in 'I guess so.'

Juming I guess is a typo, but you forgot the P. Jumping.

Starring is spelt correctly, but I think it means like the stars in the sky. Staring, is the proper use I think. I'm probabally wrong seeing as I can't spell worth for beans, but some of these mistakes are common ones I make as well.

Other then that it was good! Just the ...'s get a bit heavy, but hey! I use them too. REALLY CUTE AND GOOD FOR A FIRST ONE-SHOT!

Sincerily,

Yuki

They can call us perverts but I LOVE this pairing! This one shot was so cute but the end left me wanting more ):

its nice...interesting