HA! The Jedi aren't so great and powerful now, are they!?
Well done! You completed your first multi-chapter fic! Congrats!
Good fic!
SD04

Finally he died! Unless he miracuously excaped somehow (a lot of people seem to be coming back from the dead recently...)...
Anywho, well done! Once the epilogue is up you'll be finished your first multi-chapter fic!
And it's got more chapters than any of mine...
SD04

Fascinating story; I look forward to see where you will take it. I assume that either Inhered is going to die so that the Sith will not yet be revealed or that this is an AU fic (which the existence of the Jedi starfighters so early suggests to me anyways; in canon, they were not commissioned until 22 BBY...don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining or anything; I love the Jedi starfighters and I think it's insane that the Jedi were forced to rely on public transportation--or for the government they were assisting to provide transportation--for so long. Can you imagine how much the Order must have had to pay out-of-pocket for transportation before they commissioned their own ships? Not to mention having to wait for transport to arrive instead of just being able to get up and go at a moment's notice...) And yes, fight scenes are quite difficult to write.

DIE INHERED, DIE! Ahem.

Anyways, good chappie! Fight scenes are tough. I hate writing them. Actually I love writing them- I just hate the way they turn out.

Well done anyways! Not got much time so must dash!

SD04

nice chapters. and yay for awesome fight scenes.

Oh, well done Arios! You've picked a fight with Darth Maul! And his double bladed lightsabre! Real smart! (I hope you notice the sarcasm there!)
All in all, great chapter! Nice to see some more action!
So... will Arios die now or later...?
Update soon!
SD04

This story rocks !

Yo! Nice chappie! Good to see some classic killing!
So... are we going to see a show-down between Arios and Maul? Hm... I wonder who would win... MAUL!
Update soon!
SD04

How long did it take Arios to figure out he was being held prisoner? He can be REALLY stupid!

Good chapter! A silent protocal droid for once! LOL!

Keep updating!

Sweetdeath04

JANGO! How could you fall for a trick like that? Even if it was pulled off perfectly and rather devious!

Yeh, great chapter- made even better by the fact that Jango was in it! I know you don't think it was your best but we all have chapter's that are hard to write so don't worry about it!

Please excuse me for not reviewing sooner- I tried last night but my internet sucks!

Write more soon!

Sweetdeath04

Really good chapter! Realy long as well! Is it just me or is Arios very Imperial in his views? It's quite scary!

More Jango? Darn, I do love the Bounty Hunters!

Keep writing!

Sweetdeath04

Hey! You're back! (Well, duh!)

I told you earlier and I'll tell you again, good chapter. Nice to see the Jedi Councel and your Yoda-Talk was awesome! I can't write Yoda-Talk and I can't write Vader-Talk either ('cause he's always 'whopahh'-ing)!

Anyways, nice chapter and more soon please!

You're quicker at updating than I am so don't apologise for the wait (It makes me feel guilty!)!

~Sweetdeath04

This is very good Bob, even though you know i'm someone who doesn't know a thing about any of this. I think i might actually start reading about Star Wars, you may have convinced me.

YAY! Liked the 'secret paragraph'! Very technical!
Keep updating!
I HATE MACE WINDU!
But I do love this fic!
SD04

AWW THANK-U!
I really love this chapter! I've already told you all this before but you're developing a writing style. I started reading Shadow Hunter and I just realised how in character Maul is when you're writing him! Nice to see Jango, of course!
Great chappie! Keep uping the chapters!
Sweetdeath04