It's been awhile since you updated. Please update soon! I'll be waiting ^^

Well here is another review to add to your pile. I think it's a shame you havent' updated in so long as this is a very sexy and intricately written story. Darn it..gonna be picturing naked Gaara AL night now. =) m...

Aww, I feel sorry for Hinata I can't believe she's going blind *le gasp* Why is Gaara so obsessed with Hinata when he hasn't even met her yet? Is it because of Naruto's silent threat towards him before or is Gaara just curious about his relationship with Hinata? Oh, I can't wait till your next chapter and I hope Gaara and Hinata will meet each other soon. So there can be some GaaHina fluff!! XD

Well, here I was expecting to read another unoriginal gaa/hina fic, but no! I found your story quite original and full of loving character building and descriptions. I do wish you would continue, as I cherish what is available to read now. Thanks for your hard work and great story telling abilities!

I love your story. It's just so...beautifully written and impossible not to believe this might happen. Your eighteen right? Well, you have experience of writing and saying of a wise man. But you're youthful. Not many have a talent for a desciptive saying and still get people to know what it means.

My only question(s) does and does not invole your fanfiction.

(1) i'm sorry to be rude and if you're offended, I'm very sorry, I don't mean to offend you with this question. Are you a boy or a girl?

(2) When is Hinata going to meet Gaara? How is there realation going to start?

you're fanfictions is one of the top five Gaahina i've every read, and i've read almost all of them. Thank you for writing this. Update soon, although it will take me forever to reach chapter 5, and I wish you luck.

Thank you for writing this. We how have read have enjoyed and we thank you for it.

~GlazingSilverWing

Woah, what's up with Gaara? No shukaku, but something's else is up. This made me ponder the fanfic's title "Syncretism" a bit more. Hm...intrigueing, very much so. wai! I love Kankuro! XD He's so cool, and poor guy getting picked on by Gaara. but its oh so easy...XD anyhoo, that was a wonderful brotherly scene. ToT I wanna draw that so much.

btw, it was really distracting to read your author note in between the scenes regarding the song. ^^; If you're gonna mention a song's title or why it fits the chapter/scene mention it in your author's note at the very beginning of the chapter. Interrupting the story like that isn't really proper or good for the story. It breaks up the reader's concentration on the plot. ^^; ah yeah, and putting in lyrics to copyrighted songs also isn't allowed on but a lot of people still do it, so who cares. But if anyone decides to be a jerk and reports it, the chapter/story will get removed. ^^; *crossing fingers* Hopefully that won't happen. I personally don't mind lyrics, but author's notes do screw up my perception of the story. XD; And doesn't want to get sued by artists for using their stuff (so ridiculous, I swear...) Anyways, just giving ya a heads up for the future. AH yeah, and html links no longer appear on stories. They do appear on author's pages, but not in chapters, so if you want to share a link with people, leave a note at the end of the chapter for them to go back to your author's page to see the link. That's what authors are doing nowadays. is being a brat lately, huh?)

Ah, story question! so is this chapter a month after what happened in previous chapters? Or was Gaara refering to another time in which Hinata got sick, that resulted in the canceled meeting between Konoha and Suna?

*cracking up*...right, I get the message loud and clear! NEKKID GAARA under silk sheets it is. Dang, can you possibly lay the fanservice any heavier? wow, that's some eyecandy you're providing us readers with. LOL, it cracks me up cuz...HE'S JUST GETTING INTO BED! ha ha, you certainly described it deliciously. LOL...

anyways! ah, short chapter! I cannot wait to read what shall happen next. XD I hope college is going okay! Keep up the excellent work!

what can i say i freakin love your story.
love garra's use of sarcasim. please write more soon.

Okay...I just started reading, but OMG!! this is one of the best fabfics i've every read! Write more! ^__^

Interesting nice decription, little confusing, you did a good job. Keep it coming with more. Please I beg you ^^

you don't really have to, there is nothing wrong with it, make another chapter soon!!

*sighs* for a moment I thought you might be mad 'cause I don't know very many authors who take suggestions very well... Anyway, loved this chapter, it was just so full of mystery and suspense. What is going on with Gaara and what does Konoha have to do with it? So many questions are going on through my head and I really don't know what to really ask. I have no clue as to where you're going with this except that there is Gaa/Hina and even I don't think it will be approached in a cliche manner. Pure awesomeness, lots of emotion and depth that isn't melodrama, at least I don't see it that way. O.O Gaara in a bar...that sounds hot... XD

Nice! Can't wait for more. It kind of grabs hold and makes you want more. It does seem like Naruto see her like a mother. It could be a problem for Gaara. Naruto being the naughty prankster boy who doesn't want mom taken away. LOL. Can you imagine when Gaara and Hinata meet? Sparks are gonna fly. Great! When can we expect another chapter?

damn! The stress! The anxiety! wow, things are getting scary now! I'm really worried now! O.O; wah, poor hinata! damn, the imagery, your writing...so intense, I'm drooling here. TT; but ow, such heart-wrenching angst. And poor Naruto, Ya really hurt for him. He's so stressed out! but waah! I loved it when he hugged Hinata. She's like his mommy or something, poor boy never had a mother, really, so it was so sweet! I teared up here! ToT haha, I love how Hanabi just threw Kiba away to reach Hinata. XD kk...do not get in between sisters. ^o^ haha, I cracked up at how they all ended up in a group hug. I'm surprised Gaara didn't eyetwitch at that. LOL,

but that's probably cuz he was being cool yet frustrated at the time. Man, you know how to write him beautiful and then scary the next moment! heh, I figured he'd be spying on her. I'm not surprised at he had imagined Hinata to be some kind of angel. heh, I liked how you wrote him trying to remember her face from just the glimpse he caught of her. Man, I can't wait till he has a real encounter with her. Poor girl, just WHAT happened to her? And what's messing with her psyche and now phsyical health (besides killing herself with training)? And what the hell is going on that's got Naruto and Gaara all busy and tired. XD; Especially Naruto, poor guy! ;o;

waah! i love ya too! Your writing is like reading candy. I love it! XD oh yeah, btw, you can't post links on For that you'd have to put it in your profile. Its the only way authors can share links with readers. :) Ah, now to submit this one sketch I had forgotten about. kk, another gaahina. XD Waii! Update soon! I loved this, but its like lays chip. You can't just consume one, ya gotta have more! :D

je suis desolee for my impudence...don't know what I was smoking when I typed up that review... Anyway, this chapter was very very emotional and you gave us a large amount of political info, that I just have a gut feeling is going come back and bite our favorite characters in the butt. Hmm... if they are going to be so hard on Kiba and Hanabi, then how are Gaara and Hinata going to be able to be together, I wonder... And then with all the drama and the stress? How's Kiba going to take the "Hey man, control your hormones..." speech Naruto is supposed to give... and what about Naruto, who is on the verge of collapsing... I mean, you make it seem so bad that I even want to collapse and fall asleep. That's how good the imagery is. Poor Hinata, I can't wait to see what it is that brings her and Gaara together. Very good story, again sorry for my bs back there, won't happen again. : ) *offers up favorite chocolate chip cookie*

i can't explain it. this... has sucked me in completely. the descriptions, the imagery, the emotion, everything has made me watch this fic like a hawk. i will be here with every update! i mean it~! O_O