Very original and intelligently written story. The way each society is described is fantastic. You have done a great job in describing the motivations of each character. Fantastic.

I like this chapter and its address of potential post-honeymoon troubles between the federation and the EA. That being said, the bit at the end, supposedly an official report by either Sheridan & Co. or the Psi-Cops seems kind of garbled. Probably not the first to complain of that, but there it is, all the same.

Nice.

Very intense chapter! Although, that Federation log entry, in the last few paragraphs, was a little jumbled-sounding.

The moment the war ends the Earth Alliance will known extreme civil unrest if not divulge in open civil war.

I like your stories, keep writing

Two words to describe EA's coming headache: Political Asylum.

Like anyone except those with families would really want to go back to EA space, where they can like in a state like Russia in the 70's.

And, I don't need to be a telepath to know that Sinclair is right!

Good job, Al. Especially with the figurative egg you put on Khali's face (lol!).

Oh, yeah! That little symposium on telepaths is definitely going to be counted as a flop by PsiCorps. On a lighter note?

Heaven help K-7 if Harry Mudd teams up with Cyrano Jones (lol)!

I can't believe I missed these three latest chapter! Ah, well: on to the review.

I'm glad to finally see an appearance my three of my favorite B5 Earthlings in this altverse. Their conversation with each other was both similar to, and yet radically different from, Arati's Q&A with the Federation telepaths. With Jeffrey Sinclair and the Sheridans remaining relatively calm in the potential ramifications they discussed. And, Arati getting increasingly frustrated at having PsiCorps in general (and her judgement, in particular) being deemed questionable, at best.

I guess the telepaths of "real" Earth still have a ways to go, towards evolutionary superiority, if they're still human enough to lose their tempers like that.

Well Khali may be a arrogant bastard, but he certainly has balls! I doubt many people could stand in front of the Federation Council and spew all of that ridiculous garbage. It's a shame that the Minbari assassin interrupted his speech, I would have loved to see how it ended...the confrontation with Psicorps will be interesting to say the least, on both Archanis and at the Telepathic Convention. Maybe it would change Psicorps for the better.

I shudder to think what kind of punishment a Vulcan like Sarek could come up with...mostly a logically cold and devious one...

Would The Vorlons call upon The Borg to destroy us? I would like to say no, since The Borg are a abomination to all life and sentience, but who can say, except for you of course, what the Vorlons of your grand tale will resort to win? Though I dare say that if The Vorlons try to bring them into the war, then The Elder Races, maybe even The Q, would have to intervene once again, especially if The Borg discover the tunnels that lead to The Earth Alliance, and the other races of Vorlon controlled Territory. If that happened, then The Vorlons might as well destroy themselves, since The Borg would have no trouble at all overrunning them all.

Well, I can't wait to read Khali's fight with Guinan. It should be entertaining! I wonder why The Feds have let the Minbari Spy run around freely? I'm sure that they would have detected the explosives when he was transported, so why not just let the cat out of the bag?

When will we see a new chapter?