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Kat of the Desert
2008-12-07 . chapter 7
This is one sexy/romantic fanfic and one of the best ones I have read. Strange thing, I used to hate Yashamaru but now I think he is freaking sexy. It's finally nice to see a fanfic that is sentimental and sexy about one of my favorite couples (Believe me, fanfics on GaaraxYashamaru are hard to find)
Chromde
2008-05-18 . chapter 7
I like this quite a bit, even though Gaara/Yashamaru when Gaara's like . . . six . . . is a tad bit freaky.

Really.
doomedpassion
2007-06-22 . chapter 7
v. angst
Bamboo-Boom
2007-05-26 . chapter 7
Hey, this fic is surprisingly good! I always love cute guys in Naruto, Yashamaru is one of them although I always pity him for his mistake that resulting in Gaara's disbelief on human's touch...oh well, your fic bring another deep impact for me! Like, what if this really happen...

Although, i must confess that it will be better if you will somehow...make Gaara and Yashamaru not related...I'm a bit terrified at incest...ah, anyway, your fic is good^^!

And yes, I'd like to see if Gaara will be strong enough mentally to protect Yashamaru through any downfalls...I mean, Gaara in the first season are weak-unstable mentally because his trust is breaking over other's feeling, right? (Unlike Naruto who gain Iruka) so now that you make Yashamaru actually care about him, I think Gaara's mental state will be different from the series...Like, he must be slightly look like as calm and responsible as he is on Shippuden. Or, since he is still so young, on the way to a great wisdom.

Oh well, it's just my suggestion, hehehehe, personally I think the grown-up Gaara is way hotter than Sasuke ^^!

Oh, and one thing: why you didn't activate the anynomous review to let them review your story?
There are many great people out there who sometimes find it troublesome to sign in, so they will left review anonymously. Ofcourse, by doing that, you open the chance for flaming from Mary-sues, but there will be lots lots lots of other people who will support you!

So it's just suggestion: next time you update your fic you can advertise it proudly that "Anonymour review are allowed!" I'm sure there are many people who don't have account would love to review your wonderful story too...and maybe some will even give you good advice better than me...Okay, this is just my suggestion, I wish you'd continue your story, hehehehehe.
KR. Hetarei
2007-04-10 . chapter 7
Hey, Stella. I like the idea. I'm a big fan of Yashamaru, and I love Gaara-sama. The only problem is that it is the ONLY Gaara/Yasha fic on ffn. So there's nothing to compare it with. Keep going, but put some more thought into your phrasing, because some lines read a little wierd and sound kind of vulgar. ^_^ That's all the real critisism I have.
cast14
2007-03-10 . chapter 7
Great story I loved it I hope you will update this story soon it will be great this story is very interesting I can't wait to find out what will happen next it will me great
Everything And Nothing
2007-03-07 . chapter 7
Aww I'm so glad they are together again! ^^
I want them to kiss or... Nevermind. -_-' ... Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie!
Spuffy is a -gasp- XemoX
2007-03-02 . chapter 7
spuffy grabbed all the tissues cuz spuffy is very emotional today and spuffy cried!

this story is breaking spuffy's heart...spuffy doesn't know why spuffy is talking in third person

its not completely OOC just a little bit. spuffy can't imagine yashamaru being so bold, slightly bold but not this bold.

spuffy likes what you are doing, its different from the other yaoi stories you see with the multi sex scene chappies. this is the better side of yaoi. in spuffy's opinion

~spuffy
Distorted-Sky
2007-03-02 . chapter 7
I love this story. Ive never actually read a YashamaruXGaara fic. I got curious and read it and now I'm hooked...I wish there was more GaaraxYashamaru fics. Great Work
cast14
2007-03-02 . chapter 6
Great story I can't wait to find out what will happen next with Gaara and Yashamaru it will be great this story was very interesting I loked it i hope you will update it soon
Saint Mirror
2007-02-28 . chapter 6
Aw...so sweet and cute! I love Yashamaru...he's so awesome and yay I'm glad you updated!
Spuffy is a -gasp- XemoX
2007-02-26 . chapter 5
omg i love this story. i swear to god i might cry. I can't really find anything wrong with it...unless you count the endless dots...but not to worry i use dots a lot too.

I'll be watching this!
Saint Mirror
2007-02-25 . chapter 5
Oh...so sweet...you have to finish...i need to know what happens to Yashamaru and Gaara. Please finish soon!
Everything And Nothing
2007-01-29 . chapter 5
*tear* Aww! Poor Gaara! Why is his father so mean? >:k
Anyway, I lubbed it! ^^ I cant wait till chapter six is up!
cast14
2007-01-27 . chapter 5
great story i loved it i hope you will update this story i can't wait to find out what will happen next if gaara and yashamaru die or what well great story i liked it
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