Almost calls for a sequel, don't you think?

Really interesting story. Please write more, I'd like to know what happens with Lore.

That waz great. You should continue it. _The Adventures Of Lore_. Awesome. I loved it. Methos is the coolest, and the idea of him having a teenage(?) female student?Genius. ( 8

Cool story. Sequel wanted, please?

Umm .. cool story, but you never explain who Lore is. How old she is, where in the world she comes from, etc. Try adding some other details for more story depth.

I like it. Interestingly-written; interesting mix of grammatical and not.

dat was great!