Congratulations on a fabulous story. It's the 1st UV fanfic I've seen and it was a stroke of genius to bring in the Brigadier too. I'd love to see more. :)
Even though I have no idea who the others characters were, that was still really interesting. Don't you think Torchwood is awesome? You should have numbered it as the Torchwood 'run by a strange little man', though. ^^