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| Ebony-Jayne 2008-01-01 ch 3,  | abuseBeautiful story. admittedly i was hesitant to read it at first because i was afraid it was another one of those overreacting fan stories but it wasnt and im pleased i read it. its beautifully written and paints the kiss for what i believe it was, a benign curiosity/comfort thing. again beautifully written. thank you very much for a nice Elliot/Dani story. |
| CSIFan4Life 2007-01-10 ch 3, | abuseThis was a great fic. Sorry it took me so long to read and review it. You did a great job writing and conveying their thoughts and emotions. |
| csifreak04 2006-12-20 ch 3, | abuseI never thought of relationships in that manner before and I think it was well put. Great job! |
| tamasit1 2006-12-11 ch 3, | abuseI liked all three chapters. Really good insight into the characters and 'just a kiss'. |
| csifreak04 2006-11-28 ch 2, | abuseThis story is really heating up! I'm enjoying it very much. Keep up the great job! |
| AliasCSINYFriendsER 2006-11-27 ch 2, | abuseYeah, I read this with an open mind. And I think you write them well. It's interesting to see a different, non-shippy side to Dani and Elliot. Great work! ~mandi *_* |
| Hkitty9013 2006-11-27 ch 2, | abuseWow that was really good! Great Job! |
| intheclosetromantic 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThis fic may have to be my new best friend. lol. I wrote something like this-- I mean, there was no need for the world of EO shippers to flip out about the ED scene. Sometimes, like you said, a kiss is a kiss, and nothing more. |
| csifreak04 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI remember that episode and I always did wonder what they were thinking. I like what you wrote. I think you should continue with this story. |
| tamasit1 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked that. I tend to agree with what you wrote, a kiss can be just a kiss. |
| LALA ITS MILEY x 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abusei like how you put it because i hated how people reacted to the kiss either..really they were both had a little acohol in them but were aware of what they were doing...now we add the what would haves..i love how you put the kiss into words but dani is spelled DANI not DANNI! lol i love this though..thank god someone agrees with me about the kiss..it wasnt anythinng big! |