I have to say I'm sorely disappointed with shikamaru in this chapter. Not only did the entire group go to London, giving them no way out if something went wrong but all of them, even the ones tending to Ino decided to stay in the bar where he was meeting Dumbledore. Then he faced Dumbledore himself alone and if you were just trying to get this over with without to much think, you did the conversation offscreen. Your worst chapter yet, EASILY. What happened to the guy that could give Dumbledore a run for his money. Jeez.

Frankly this has so far been the best crossover fic that I hae ever read. Keep up the good work. My only crisism is that in chapter 6 a simple "understood" would ave been the far smarter reply then writing about how butthurt you are. So yeah.

Yay Yuuko from Tsubasa and xHolic! X3

Shikamaru cut ino's hair didn't he? Nothing else would make ino scream like that.

You can call your stories whatever you want. Looking forward to the next chapter. This story is awesome so far.

Oh, I love it!

so just who decided to take on this story after you?

"((A/N: was that a clear explanation? Okay, think of it like this, someone ahead of you on the freeway throws a rubber ball straight up out of the sunroof, and you run into it as it comes down. I hope that's clearer...))"

Actually, it would be more accurate to say that someone in a helicopter (sitting still) dropped a ball INTO the sunroof. If you used your method, the only thing stopping the ball from just falling back inside would be wind. Try it, use a ball and no sunroof in a moving vehicle. The ball will fall as if you were standing still, so long as the driver doesn't suddenly hit the brakes, or alter speed. Also, the windows should be up. I'm too lazy to explain the actual science behind it, but it does work!! I promise.

TTFN
Rinn ^_^

I really like this fic..
Oh ur french is wrong its je m'appelle Anaïs. In French you can't say My name is... You say I am called...

So far I'm enjoying the story. It's detailed and well thought out. The only thing I don't get is why they keep using genjutsu instead of henge. Especially someone like Naruto who isn't exactly skilled with genjutsu. I guess it really doesn't make sense to me.

Wow! This is an amazing story. You write very well, and you've done a great job with keeping the characters true. I especially like the humor. My only regret is that Lee is not in it...although he wouldn't do to well at pretending to be a student and all...

Please finish it! It's to good not too!

Wow.

I thought I had read some clever Harry Potter Naruto crossovers. Ones that had good twists and turns, ones that kept me guessing.

Know what? This left all of them in the dust. This one actually had me up, after I had finished reading it, wondering at the angles and what was coming next. I'd have a theory one chapter, only to be forced to dismiss it the next, in favor of another.

Is Tenten under the Imperious Curse? I don't think she's dead anymore... But I'm not sure. And Shikamaru is scaring me.

Another thing you've managed to do with this story is actually have me support Shikamaru and Ino as a couple. ShikaTema is the only Naruto couple I really care about enough to stay away from stories involving them with others. But this story must be the first InoShika story I've read, not in spite of the couple. I'm actually enjoying how you've done their relationship, though I suppose it is over now (for the time being?). Anyway, I thought I would mention that, because I surprised myself by realizing I wasn't put off when I found out they were together.

Well, this review length is getting rather ridiculous, so I'll stop rambling. :D

please update,I really love the story :(

gah...:| are you going to update? this is just cruel not at least telling us whats gonna happen...:| oh well. :)

“It doesn't matter how hard you wish,” a voice said, floating past the doorway. “You will never have abs as great as mine.”

BEST LINE EVER! (though i at first thought it was Zabuza, now HE has nice abs! :P)

Ok. FIRSTLY. I love this chapter! Great job on comic releif!! :D
these lines were amazing:
“The friendliness in this compartment repulses me,” Snape said suddenly. “I'll be going, Krum.”

“I wonder where Malfoy is?” Harry vaguely wondered, glancing at the Slytherin table where Crabbe and Goyle sat, looking rather lost without their leader.
“I-don't-know-I-haven't-seen-him-at-all-during-the-summer,” Nearly Headless Nick said very quickly, appearing out of nowhere.

AHAHAHAHAHA...:D