That was great! I'm so glad I'm back on now. Because I have carpal tunnel, I now have voice recognition software, and I'm using it right now! Isn't it great?

Sorry, I'm a little excited. *grin* Anywho, your poem was awesome! Great job, as usual. :-).

BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint

yay! very nice!

Ah. The smart one who can successfully write poems.

Very nice. It rhymes and everything- I'm impressed again. :P

Nice rhyme, rhythm, etc. Repetition very tidy. The one bit of change - third stanza, "three" to "thrice". Sounds a bit neater. And... I think Faure is Fauré, with an accent and all. :P Not much else, though. Very tidy, rhythmically and conceptually.

Beyond that... well, condolances, again, though that's rather dry, and it appears to be spelled wrong to boot.