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TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
continue!
deviline12.1
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
This story is pretty good so far.
I like it already. Naruto's future looks better already.
Please update soon.

I have a question: is the pairing Ita/Naru, Sasu/Naru, Sasu/Ita or Naru/Ita?

It's all so confusing.
Who's the dominating one and who's not?
What's the pairing?

Anyways, update soon.
Lil-lo
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
I am looking forward to seeing Itachi and Sasuke form the bonds of obsessive love. There are so many things I can imagine happening, that I would love to see how you write the situations out.
Sabaku no -X-Temari-X-
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
Oh I love it! XD This is my favorite quote from this chapter: “Uchiha Nakimaze Uzumaki Naruto. The kid is definitely going to hate us for that mouthful.” But it is Namikaze, not Nakimaze, don't worry, just got the M and K mixed.
Can't wait for another chapter :)
Loyal Reader,
Sabaku no -:X:-Temari-:X:-
sasquatchsnake
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
This is cute. ^^ I like it. I like the whole 'Naruto adopted by Uchihas' thing, and I'm definitely interested in seeing how this turns out. ^^ I hope you decide to continue!
Steven Kodaly
2008-01-31 . chapter 1
Hmm, so perverted!Uchihas are in the offing for this story, you way? Well, I'm looking forward to seeing that.
RoxasIsReal13
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
Great start!
Heaven Cobra
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
this is a good story. update?
perfectly weird
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
fufufufufu...Naruto as the cousin...i'm sure its going to be interesting. a nice plot here so update soon k
Witty Remark
2007-07-24 . chapter 1
Damn, you haven't updated since '06. *sobs* GAH! I want you to update so bad! 'Cause Ita/Naru is awesome and so is your story. And your writing style... that's pretty good, too.

So, update, please. *pouts* Don't make me get Naruto over here!
Elladan Seregon
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
So, uh, update, yeah? I mean, it is quite an awesome story, and I'd love to see how it plays out, so...

Update, yeah? Please?
akuma-river
2007-04-20 . chapter 1
Umm...

Japanese names do have Last name first, but with that long list of last names wouldn't it be more like this: Uchiha Naruto Uzumaki Kazama instead of Uchiha Kazama Uzumaki Naruto?

Btw, love it.
fluff-pirates
2007-04-09 . chapter 1
very well written :) plz update!
StupefiedNarutard
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
Holy ** yes! I've never read a story where Naruto was adopted by Uchiha's... This will definitely be interesting. Yay for ItaNaru, it's wonderous! I like how it's started out, nice descriptions, not too complicated words that make you sad because they have too much meaning in them (sorry, still getting over a recent fic that did that to me XD)...
I can't wait to see what'll happen next really, it's wonderful that you decided to write this, we need all the ItaNaru we can get! I like Naruto's name, it's long... but cute.
I wonder what Itachi will be like? Really, I'm excited to see what you do with this! -bounces up and down- Omg!
I loved the shop owner people, they were so nice, esp. the daddy cause he took into account little Sasuke's feelings. I wonder how Naruto will turn out... I'm sure he'll still be an outcast, but now he'll have love to begin with, so I'm wondering if that will make him different. I wonder if he'll automatically be friends with Sasuke, since he'll be... I guess, near him.

I'm so rambling and wasting your time, but really, I think I already love this fic. Darn me for my excitement over such things! Anyboat, another thank you for reviewing my fic too!

Update as soon as you can, but no pressure okay? Go at your own pace... it makes the story a whole lot better that way!

lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard
This.is.an.abandoned.Account
2006-12-24 . chapter 1
It seems good and I want to read more so PLEASE continue this story! I think that there should be more stories like this! Itachi AND Sasuke having an obsesion for Naruto... man you have to pity poor NAru-cha! Very good start! I would reccomend the next chapter start around himgoing to the acedemy or something! It would probably be best to have flash backs to show his past!
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