...women start to have their periods as early as 10 but i do not believe that there has been a case that there was someone who started getting their period around their twenties. I do not believe that's possible. in fact, I believe that's impossible.

I HAVE TO DO THIS, I HAVE TO BE THE 200TH REVIEWER!! lol, I love this story so far, there's a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major so i wouldn't worry bout it :P again awesome story once i finish reading this one, i'll check out the sequel, I remember i started reading the sequel, wanted to read the prequel, and here i am ^^ So yeah, LOVIN IT!

Ahaha. xD I was just going to keep on reading through to the end, and then leave a review...but as soon as I saw this line, I couldn't stop laughing, and knew I had to compliment your writing. "‘Not to mention, I’ve had to deal with a stalker and these goddamned tampons!’ she silently added." Ahaha. XD

nice story! i like it! oh yea bout the bachelor, i would like to choose gojyo!

I WUV YO STORYY! I'LL GO FOR BACHELOR 3: GOJYO!! *SQUELS*

I'LL GO FOR GOJYO AND SANZO! BECUZ THEIR FUNNY! GOJYO SANZO! GOJYO SANZO! GOJYO SANZOO! GOJYO GOJYO GOJYO GOJYO GOJYO GOJYO SANZO SANZO SANZO SANZO! FOREVER AND EVER!

...Wait... Sanzo has his er... her period at the age of 23? I thought if it's on your teen...

i like this series.
it's very fun.
I have a question though.
In the last chapter, when Goku asks if Sanzo shot at Hakkai, it said that she didnt want Goku to know that she shot at Hakkai for a reason. And then Hakkai went along with it and when Sanzo offered to drive, it was her way of apologizing.
My 1st question is, she did shoot around him, right?
2nd...Is there a reason she shot at Hakkai? I cant seem to remember. Thats all, thanks bye!

lol...now we know why Sanzo is so pissy all the time! She's permanently PMSing! lol. keep up the good work!

Very interesting story so far! I'm off to read the sequel. ^^

The pairing I'm hoping for is Hakkai/Sanzo, but I'll read whatever pairing happens to win

Hello.
Okay, first off.
I love this story!
Especially the end.
By the way, in the last chapter, which was the one that said, "'Huh? AH!'".
It said the boy yelled as Jeep suddenly started speeding fast and out of control.
Was that Hakkai, or Gojyo, of Goku?
I'm kinda confused on that part.
I dont think it is Sanzo as she is a girl.
Please, if you have the time, reply back.
THank you.
Good luck with the sequel.

Suggestions: What! Sanzo's My Girlfriend! (i know this one is bad sorry)

Love Me or Face the Fan! (heh heh this one is bad too.)

Guns, Smokes, and Attitude: The Whole Package (I actually like this one, which probably doesnt mean anything to you.)

The Blond Bombshell with the Gunpowder (wow, arent they getting worse)

ha ha this is all ive got. if i continue i will probably scar you for life due to my horrible seqeul titles.

thanks for reading and i love your story.
nice job

Your story is so funny!! Luv it!! But the pairing should either be SxH or SxG or even SxT

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Hello there~

(Note that I'm actually taking time to review. I -almost- never review.)

Okay, I began reading this story because the title looked interesting and promising, I have a thing for crossdressing, and I love Sanzo.

It had a nice beginning. Good grammar, nice plot.
But then... SHE APPEARED >_>

That "Tsumi".

She has pretty much all of the qualities of a Mary-Sue. Look it up in if you don't know what it means.

Then there was the part where she reffered to Sanzo as a "she" and nobody noticed that. What the?! Someone, even if it's just one person that's NOT Tsumi is just BOUND to notice!

After that, the fact Tsumi was actually a man... Now she has changed from Mary-Sue to it's male version. A Gary-Stu.

This isn't as important as the rest, but you took way too long to reveal Sanzo's secret. The excitement kinda dies down after so many chapters and everyone's still oblivious to Sanzo's secret. The readers get tired of reading at some point.

Like I said before, the story's good and has great potential. You just need to work on those tiny details to make it better.

This is a constructive critic. I'm not cursing, not loathing, or anything. Just trying to help out by giving my opinions. So you don't have to take it personally or do anything I said. It's your story and you choose what you do with it. As I said, I'm just trying to help improve your writing.

;D If I just ignore the Sue's it's by far, one of the best Saiyuki stories I've ever read. And I read a LOT.

~Sincerly
Flamethrower30 (My critic pen name =P )

THIS IS GREAT!