Reviews for What! Sanzo's A Girl!

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joycer22 2008-05-22 ch 2,	abuseluv ya story! i just started reading it today, so far i'm in chapter 2 (just wanted to tell). luv it!
4evachanginmeyelife 2007-11-24 ch 28,	abusei like this series. it's very fun. I have a question though. In the last chapter, when Goku asks if Sanzo shot at Hakkai, it said that she didnt want Goku to know that she shot at Hakkai for a reason. And then Hakkai went along with it and when Sanzo offered to drive, it was her way of apologizing. My 1st question is, she did shoot around him, right? 2nd...Is there a reason she shot at Hakkai? I cant seem to remember. Thats all, thanks bye!
DustBunnyQueen 2007-10-06 ch 2,	abuselol...now we know why Sanzo is so pissy all the time! She's permanently PMSing! lol. keep up the good work!
Aloria-Catalonia 2007-09-09 ch 31,	abuseVery interesting story so far! I'm off to read the sequel. ^^ The pairing I'm hoping for is Hakkai/Sanzo, but I'll read whatever pairing happens to win
4evachanginmeyelife 2007-06-29 ch 31,	abuseHello. Okay, first off. I love this story! Especially the end. By the way, in the last chapter, which was the one that said, "'Huh? AH!'". It said the boy yelled as Jeep suddenly started speeding fast and out of control. Was that Hakkai, or Gojyo, of Goku? I'm kinda confused on that part. I dont think it is Sanzo as she is a girl. Please, if you have the time, reply back. THank you. Good luck with the sequel. Suggestions: What! Sanzo's My Girlfriend! (i know this one is bad sorry) Love Me or Face the Fan! (heh heh this one is bad too.) Guns, Smokes, and Attitude: The Whole Package (I actually like this one, which probably doesnt mean anything to you.) The Blond Bombshell with the Gunpowder (wow, arent they getting worse) ha ha this is all ive got. if i continue i will probably scar you for life due to my horrible seqeul titles. thanks for reading and i love your story. nice job
steph 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour story is so funny!! Luv it!! But the pairing should either be SxH or SxG or even SxT
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Flamethrower3000 2007-02-22 ch 9, anon.	abuseHello there~ (Note that I'm actually taking time to review. I -almost- never review.) Okay, I began reading this story because the title looked interesting and promising, I have a thing for crossdressing, and I love Sanzo. It had a nice beginning. Good grammar, nice plot. But then... SHE APPEARED >_> That "Tsumi". She has pretty much all of the qualities of a Mary-Sue. Look it up in if you don't know what it means. Then there was the part where she reffered to Sanzo as a "she" and nobody noticed that. What the?! Someone, even if it's just one person that's NOT Tsumi is just BOUND to notice! After that, the fact Tsumi was actually a man... Now she has changed from Mary-Sue to it's male version. A Gary-Stu. This isn't as important as the rest, but you took way too long to reveal Sanzo's secret. The excitement kinda dies down after so many chapters and everyone's still oblivious to Sanzo's secret. The readers get tired of reading at some point. Like I said before, the story's good and has great potential. You just need to work on those tiny details to make it better. This is a constructive critic. I'm not cursing, not loathing, or anything. Just trying to help out by giving my opinions. So you don't have to take it personally or do anything I said. It's your story and you choose what you do with it. As I said, I'm just trying to help improve your writing. ;D If I just ignore the Sue's it's by far, one of the best Saiyuki stories I've ever read. And I read a LOT. ~Sincerly Flamethrower30 (My critic pen name =P )
hellscream89 2007-01-29 ch 4,	abuseTHIS IS GREAT!
Bishonen'sFoxyMiko 2007-01-15 ch 31,	abuseThat was pretty good. Now I'm off to read the sequel^^
taiteilijan666 2007-01-13 ch 31, anon.	abusehello, hey this is still good...hahah the funniest part was sanzo's attempt to drive, in the anime it was so funny!! from, taiteilijan6
Red Kitsune Flames 2007-01-12 ch 31,	abuseExcellent! I love how you weave your story in with the manga so well.
Cielo 2007-01-10 ch 31, anon.	abusewow! even if i had read the manga for this, i couldn't stop reading your fic!! i'll go for hakkai and sanzo pairing!
Alexis Hoheimer 2007-01-10 ch 31,	abusei shall await the sequel^^ lol, a title? derive the title from something significant you have happen in the story. That's what i usually do, unless i listen to a song then name the fic after some line i heard in the song. maybe you can use the word curse somewhere in the title... (ie. Secret of the Curse-not a suggestion but a sugesstion in how to use 'curse' in the title)
Nina 2007-01-10 ch 31, anon.	abuseWow! Your story was great! I enjoyed it! I don't know if the vote is still open, but I vote for Goku! ha, ha, ha, I read the reviews people sent to you, and I can't understand when people say that Sanzo would be a pedophile if he was with Goku (Goku isn't 10! He's 18!) and even if sometimes he behaves like a child, he's not just that, plus Sanzo likes him for that... I'm eager to see the sequel!

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