Very cute.

-Arciere

Lovely! The beginning kinda made me hate Persephone a bit, but then I realized at the end you were trying to make her a more rounded character. Great job!

Great fic.

I LOVE IT! Very good story.

Awesome!

Hey Fallacy, the storyline is good, but I think you need to read your mythology again. Zeus, Poiseidon, Hades and Hestia are all siblings, born of Kronos and Rhea, who were titans. Kronos was sliced up into millions of pieces and cast into Tartarus. Rhea followed her husband.

The Underwold is not merely hell - it is a land of the dead. It does have Elysium, which is pretty much heaven. And Tartarus is where the Titans were buried, the stuff nightmares are made of. It's supposed to be pretty far under the Underworld.

Ever read the 'Percy Jackson' series? All on Greek Mythology, set in modern times. You might enjoy it.

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I quite liked this interpretation of the two of them. Hades doesn't seem quite so cold, and Persephone has a little bit of hardness to her, which I suppose is what you need to be Queen of the Underworld.

I also liked how you considered that Zeus was in the Sky, Demeter was on Earth and Persephone was in the Underworld, that family has all the bases covered _

this is a wierd story but very enticing

wow this is a well-written story

and the fact that it is based on Greek Myth makes it more unique and different from the average anime fanfic hehe nice job D

oh I love Greek Mythology! And Hades and Persephone are my favorite .

I am infinitely fascinated with Greek Mythology and to have you write a piece so beautiful made my day. :)

Great story! This is very interesting. Thanks for writing this! God bless!

That was amazing n.n I adore your writing style, it's beautiful! wonderful portrayal of the characters, and a wonderful take on the story. Amazing job!

I always have loved Greek Mythology, and the way you write it is...*sniffle* so beautiful!

wow! this is great.